|Reviews for Voyager: Balance|
| MrsPeelWe'reNeeded chapter 1 . 12/17/2008
A great story. Very good.
| onoudint chapter 1 . 11/22/2008
What a wonderful story. I hope you plan on putting more Voyager stories up.
| stampensue chapter 1 . 9/27/2007
Nice writing! i really enjoyed the romance. I'd like this to continue with the dinner, and the "dessert".
| Singing Violin chapter 1 . 9/27/2007
Wow, this was...kind of creepy. But sweet, too, in its way. I love the descriptions - you paint a very beautiful picture.
I'm a little upset by Chakotay spying on her after he told her she wouldn't be disturbed, and I think she might be mad if she found out he was watching. (In fact, she'll probably figure it out when he brings her the flowers...*shudder*. Will she cry then too?) Also, what she wrote was a little teenagerish - and it really lasted that long but was still going to be washed away with the tide? That planet's got one slow-orbiting moon!
One typo: "lunched" should be "launched" (when you're talking about Kathryn throwing the pebbles into the ocean).
| Hestia01 chapter 1 . 9/27/2007
Wow, I really enjoyed that! Thanks for sharing it :-) I'm not surprised it won.
| Yankee Bard chapter 1 . 9/27/2007
Well done. Great look at how a person working under great stress unwinds.
| PaulaRway chapter 1 . 9/27/2007
A lovely story. I'm so glad you posted it. It's always a treat to find a "lost treasure".