|Reviews for Symphony of the Abyss|
| LightDarkandChaos chapter 5 . 12/31/2009
Che... Sucks to be Luke right now, doesn't it? Please continue!
| Laryna6 chapter 5 . 9/11/2009
Very amusing. I like how you incorperated the eyes into game mechanics.
Luke's the ~sentience of a fonon that might not exist here - is that going to be an issue? If there's no seventh fonon raw materials, would fomicry work? On the other hand, Luke's a sentient cluster of pure seventh fonon... Raw materials? Or has Mithos just not thought that far yet?
I'd love to see how this turns out.
| The Sage of Spirits chapter 5 . 3/2/2009
"as it was unsure how many 'dastardly tricks' Jade had taught him" -'as he.' And lol, that would be funny.
"Dist went into a long tirade about the many ways Jade had wronged him" -I'm sensing the "Keterberg Hotel Beating." My personal favorite. XP
""It's Luke," said Luke." -the 'said Luke' bits sounds awkward. Maybe a simple 'he said' sense he's introducing himself.
"The squad leader glanced at Luke" -forgot the period.
The gossiping girls got really annoying. -_-'
Oh come on. Those gossipers are positively useless.
| nibeijia chapter 5 . 2/13/2009
lol poor luke. to get into such a mess XD i cant wait until the next update
| frostneko chapter 5 . 2/8/2009
Wow, it's been a while. So I wonder what's up next? Is Asch going to be abducted? Van would not be happy. What about Ion, Sync, and Florian? I wonder, I wonder. Don't keep readers waiting too long!
| The Blocked Writer chapter 5 . 2/7/2009
Meltokio(Jade actually) 1
Luke -1 for getting captured twice
| Devilsbliss chapter 5 . 2/3/2009
Luke vs Lloyd: the ultimat tales battle. Anyways update soon.
| Devilsbliss chapter 1 . 2/3/2009
ive played both games and fell in love instantly. you do jade and kratos justice to their role and i can't wait to read more.
| freakyanimegal chapter 5 . 2/2/2009
XD! Oh poor Lukie...you're in trouble, aren't you? X3
| Cafe-Publications chapter 5 . 2/1/2009
(gasp) Luke might be imprisoned! This story is so good! o Please update as soon as possible!
| nolongerhereok chapter 5 . 2/1/2009
Woh! Keep going, I just played Abyss, and frankly, I liked it more than Symphonia x]
| Yume Hanabi chapter 4 . 11/10/2008
That was very entertaining, I like the idea very much 3
Can't wait until the twins get to come too P
| The Sage of Spirits chapter 4 . 11/9/2008
"“You’d make an excellent test subject. It would be a shame to have to kill you,”" -The similarities between Raine and Jade are highly disturbing. And he always has Lloyd to study, just like Raine. XD
When the group encounters Kratos again, I do hope something will happen with Jade, dealing with his observation skills. I won't say what that is though - you're on your own with that.
"double demon fang" -Capitalize - Technique Names.
I had a feeling Dist was planning to use it for her. But then again, I don't know what point Auldrant is at in its game sequence... \
All in all, it's turning out very well, methinks. I just don't know what point Abyss is at, but once I find out, it will make more sense.
| The Sage of Spirits chapter 3 . 11/9/2008
"He didn't need to pull anyone else over. Not yet." -An inclimation of things to come?
"I won't fail, I promise you" -Forgot the period.
"summoned her" -here
"The others stood back." -I had a whole block on this, but you totally ruined that after I continued reading beyond the quoted sentence. Darn you and your inputed logic. XD
Hmm? Jade can't use his magic? Could it be because of having mana as opposed to fonons?
Or possibly, higher level magic... \
| The Sage of Spirits chapter 2 . 11/9/2008
"Lloyd replaced the manhole cover once everyone had made it through." -It's amazing how we tend to forget this minor detail. Kudos for you for remembering.
"Her expression changed to one of amusement; Zelos found it kind of creepy."Of course I've heard them. I'm the one who started the rumours, after all." Zelos was so surprised by the voice that answered him, he practically fell over backwards. It was decidedly... tenor. It was a man! When this was all over, the first thing he would do would be to get his eyes checked. The man turned away long enough to pay for his drinks, and then stood up." -Hahahahahah! Leave it to Jade to act like that. XD
Sorry, I don't think I found anything worth mentioning. (