This is one of the first HP ffs I have read, and arguably one of my favourites (if not the favorite one). Excellent and gradual buildup of feelings makes this story realistic and a treat for Harmony shippers like me.

I actually read it few months back on portkey, but suddenly remembered it and was unable to find it. After few hours of extensive searching, I found it again and now can read once more to my satisfaction. I know this review is almost 2 decades late from the time when you wrote this, and I don't even know if you will read this review ever, but this is just to let you know how much I appreciate this piece of writing (along with snogging chronicles, another beautiful story of yours) :)

Why are they celebrating Harry’s birthday a month late? Also Hermione would never use the grammatical incorrect phrase “Harry and me” it would be “Harry and I”

Lets be at least accurate about Harrys Burthday its July 31 so u can say a Late birthday present. The idea that u just made him the birthday boy as if his birthday is August 31 is ridiculous and lazy writing.

Did u read the books please tell me this is an overlooked typo because if u make more timeline confusions such as fourth year and the DA and room of Requierment. When both of those things happened in fifth year. I shant be able to carry on.

Ok so clearly you dont understand the meaning of Prolouge, in prolouges u show what happened in the past and then chappternone either starts days, weeks, months and even uears after the prolouge is supposed to happen. Starting chapter one right where yiu left of makes me feel as if u have nonidea what ur doing becaus then this is chapter 2 and the prolouge doesnt actually exist.

So i read the comments and then i came in to read cuz i was still intrested. Im a tad worried over some of ur plot points. One is this weird trope where Harry seems fond of Dumbles. Ut still disrespectful it doesnt add up Harry just aounds petulant and not actualky angry at the injustice. Second is the fight between Dumbles and Voldy, like way to throw cannon in the trash lol. Third is this idea that Harry would even get that level of sassy with his Uncle. Like talk about OOC. Idk if ill finish this story but seeing as this is just the prologue im gonna go on snd see what happens.

After years away from the site, I return for this gem and all time favorite of mine. Its a re read for me, and im enjoying it like its the first experience. Cant wait to finish it. I must research what other works you have been up to all these years.

i love your story sometimes i wish hese were real moment in the series!

England: Does pizzas by the pizza 99% of the time, not by the slice. Also never seen mozzarella outside a fancy restaurant.

I’m loving this Ron!

Yank alertChapter 4: Ordering pizza in U.K. never has single slices, also coke not cola

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Mrs Granger seems awfully chill about the weird love rectangle her daughter is involved in.

Misspelling prologue does not inspire confidence in your writing, author.

Dollars? Dollars?! What the hell?