Reviews for Looking at Your Hands
Tanya Lilac chapter 1 . 5/15/2014
What to say that hasn't already been said? Sexy, sensuous and incredibly intimate to the point of blushing. Even in the heat of the moment, the dialogue is well characterised, as is Tenten's exposition. This is definitely PWP but it's polished without being ... over the top and gaudy. Reads like an intense fantasy because you know you want it. XD
Tatshana chapter 1 . 5/6/2013
I think you're trying to kill me.
In a very positive way, I suppose...
I am now through I think 17 pages of Rated M-stories of Neji and Tenten as characters.
And I never saw a "first-time-fic" including Neji AND Lee...
Oh my thoughts.
I am kind of ?drooling? here?
I like the idea.
You wrote with a nice grammar and the choice of words was fitting as well.
Nice one!
Broken Jar Of Hearts chapter 1 . 1/9/2013
hmmmm threesome :P
appletree98 chapter 1 . 5/12/2012
Guest chapter 1 . 7/26/2011
*clutching nose, blood dripping through her fingers* holy shit. That was simply amazing. Now, if you'll excuse me, I need to go dunk my head in the horse trough outside.
Lionasha No Bruja chapter 1 . 7/23/2010
Hot. That is all.
Levi Ackerman chapter 1 . 5/28/2010
*blushing madly*


i'm dying to read more of your stuff...

this was beautiful

i'm too dazed to give you a proper review...
Sandataba chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
The American writer Sloan Wilson said: "If the sex scene doesn't make you want to do it - whatever it is they're doing - it hasn't been written right."

*Clears throat awkwardly*

You wrote it so right.

*Runs off to take an icy cold shower*
yinyangren chapter 1 . 3/12/2009
Haha, yes... Me liked. Have found myself addicted to OT3s and such... :D
hellohworld chapter 1 . 10/19/2008
Wowie... MAN, I never thought I would read NejiLeeTen as an actual threesome. (because, some people like to taunt Lee... and it just like..., anyway...) The way you wrote it was AWESOME, and hawt, yet sweet for a pwp.

So... sorry if that mindless jumble of mine was confusing. XD
HinataMorningstar chapter 1 . 11/26/2007
um. well. that was hot.
Mrs Hatake Itachi chapter 1 . 10/18/2007
Sagishi chapter 1 . 9/29/2007
Aw...that was so sweet. Okay, so maybe PWP's aren't normally supposed to be "sweet" or "cute" but that's all I can think right now XD. I loved it though - the writing, the characterizations, the emotions. Very nice. D
Sadiztik Torture chapter 1 . 9/29/2007
Wow, that was beautifully written, and equally as hot. I actually liked it. Normally I am not a Ten/Lee fan, but damn. Simply amazing.
sweet-taboos chapter 1 . 9/27/2007
Wow. It's not everyday where I read a story like this. Teams that become lovers always peek my interest. I usually read NaruSakuSasu but this one turned out great. I don't get the pleasure of reading NejiTenLee very often. It was pleasurable. :P
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