Reviews for Danielth
James Birdsong chapter 3 . 7/13/2014
First chapter is good. Second chaper is bad because you made it one paragraph instead of easy to read like first chapter. I hope someone adopts your story.
Cman710 chapter 2 . 10/12/2007
Good chapter, but I still think it should be longer, it's hard to establish characters/realtionships to the full extent with only a paragraph... But that's just my opinion, it was a good backstory to him though.
Cman710 chapter 1 . 10/7/2007
I like it a lot but I wish it was a little longer, I suggest you write longer chapters.