|Reviews for In Honor|
| Maz Kazama chapter 2 . 6/8/2009
This is a brave idea and the content of the writing is pretty good, there's just a few little issues that might make it better.
I know formatting can be a pain at times but if possible you should put new speech on a new line so it's easier to determine when a new person is speaking and it breaks up the text a little.
In the same vein, try to use paragraphing as reading everything in a long block of text is difficult.
Apart from that it just needs a little proofreading, there's quite a few missing words and uncapitalised letters.
I really liked how you wrote about Sam's almost-denial of Dean's death and his disbelief of it and how he remembers Dean at all the major events in his life, that's very realistic.
| Sweet-Roxas chapter 1 . 9/28/2007
Aww, why Dean WHY! that was sad, keep it up! :)
| huntergirl727 chapter 1 . 9/28/2007
Wow, shocking. Keep going, love to see where this goes. I'm all about the aftermath of death.