Reviews for Harry Potter and The Acts of Betrayal
rarummings chapter 1 . 6/19
it was a good story until you had him marrying 2 ppl ...you need to label this a three some...I would never have read this has I known that.
Guest chapter 7 . 5/26
Eh, cute story until THE SECOND WIFE bullshit popped up. Yeah, no thank you. Good writing and plot, otherwise, though.
Xavras chapter 20 . 5/19
I am surprised I never found this before...
Nice story
Like the twist at the end with the Black family oath

yes, it has a lot of tropes from other stories, but this one has been around awhile...
Kariel13 chapter 20 . 5/17
very very ooc for all involved. great plot, okay writing technique.
fenixfether chapter 4 . 5/14
Me in the beginning of chapter 4: "Please don't fuck up Luna, please don't fuck up Luna" followed by sort of dejectedly shaking my head and thinking, "no, it's useless...everyone fucks up Luna".
Me after reading chapter 4: "ooh...I like this Luna...MORE"
Warthogs anag chapter 20 . 5/9
Thank you for a wonderful story. Totally unputdownable.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/3
Paris Saint Germain is coping this story
ABC5dashboard chapter 20 . 4/27
The pairing of the story should be Harry/Hermione/Daphne, not just Harry/Hermione... It will be off putting for the people who don't like polygamy.
roon0 chapter 19 . 4/20
Ron and Ginny deserve praise for their actions in this chapter. :D
roon0 chapter 18 . 4/20
Got to love Filius and Justin the brave.
roon0 chapter 17 . 4/20
Great chapter.
roon0 chapter 16 . 4/20
Go Neville and Hannah, go Daphne and Hermione. :D
roon0 chapter 15 . 4/20
I do love Luna.
roon0 chapter 14 . 4/20
Thank goodness Harry spotted the potions.
roon0 chapter 13 . 4/20
Oh wow lots of things happening here.
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