Reviews for Harry Potter and The Acts of Betrayal
Anon chapter 19 . 10/30
Is Harry in this fic? Does he actually do anything? Lots of threats, little action. And now Neville is apparently stronger?

Unimpressed
Disappointed chapter 1 . 10/1
There should have been a warning that this would be another "Harry Harem" story. It was labeled as being a Harry/Hermione story, instead. What a disappointment to find that it wasn't!
kaijuka chapter 7 . 8/30
for the love of god, tag relationships properly. this is not a harry/hermione fic, its a harry/hermione/dapne fic.
Bronze chapter 1 . 8/4
And Good Ole Fumblemort and Molly the Potions Queen strike again! Fumbles " I make the decisions for eveybody cause I know everything! " fool just can't keep his beak out of everyone else's business. And Molly wants Harry to marry her little girl for his fame and possibly the Potter fortune. Arthur is either a doormat or a victim of the Potion Queen. When these two and their allies go down, I hope it's extremely far and the landing is even harder than the fall.
Miki Liseya chapter 1 . 7/24
I should give you a heads up, but there are two plagarized copies of your story here on FFnet!

I'm defininitely enjoying your story though, and hope to see more from you soon!
capsandshirts chapter 20 . 7/13
All in all a good story. Those who are trashing on it for the rape backgrounds are idiots for not realizing that it is a story first. And second that something is being done to stop them. I also like how you made it technically a triad but didnt make it to where hermione or daphne where automatically bi just because.
Marc the Unruly chapter 19 . 6/17
A fantastic story that I enjoyed rereading...again. :)
chelatrix chapter 1 . 6/6
i am so sick of untagged triads, i was desperately hoping the contract would fall through but the second contract was signed im out. for anyone reading this review this is not a harmony fic its a harry/hermione/daphne fic ugh
Rebatrek chapter 14 . 6/4
This is evej
L bulshhut

Thid is evil busksi
blcoachmac chapter 9 . 5/5
Bwahahaha! Dumbledore is screwed!
blcoachmac chapter 4 . 5/5
Love Luna!
blcoachmac chapter 1 . 5/5
Rain hellfire and damnation on all of them!
horoscorpio chapter 18 . 4/5
Love this Filius
BlazeStryker chapter 17 . 3/23
Rant. Ranty rantedy rant. Rant-rant-RANT-rant rant.

You write very well but I will forever insist on the death of Headbastards.
BlazeStryker chapter 12 . 3/23
Headbastards Must Die.
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