Reviews for Harry Potter and The Acts of Betrayal
old-crow chapter 16 . 5/15
Hi,

Always a good time rereading this.

All the best,
O-C
Athan Winter chapter 17 . 5/7
Did you mean Unspeakables. Unmentionables is as far as I know UNDERWEAR
The Ghostly Minion chapter 13 . 4/30
My problem here is that Hermione is a very smart woman. Moreover, she knows what happened to her with the Weasleys and has had to defend herself against Ron.

So why in the name of sanity is she in the library alone, walking back alone with her nose deep in a book?

For that matter, what are H&D thinking? Why are they not all in a group when not in quarters? Why are they not using Dobby as backup?

This cliffhanger simply goes against these characters, both in canon and in this
Ariadne Venegas chapter 20 . 4/28
12 OMG maybe is too much? They have to repopulate magical England and all?

I really like it

And ron would end up happy to know he died a hero...
And Ginny killed imaginary Hermione and avenged his bro so I think she is happy.

What happened with Molly? I hope she went to Azcaban too!
The Ghostly Minion chapter 4 . 4/25
If you are going to have a Luna who is a seer, this is the way to run it. Very good.

TGM
The Ghostly Minion chapter 3 . 4/25
Small inconsistency: first telling, Hermione has no wand and has to take Tonks'; second telling Hermione has her wand, she takes Tonks', but for a different reason.

TGM
jon08 chapter 7 . 4/2
Not soppy. Analytical like Hermione would be, especially offering the trial marriage option, a sure fire way so Harry thinks he's doing it for her protection, and she gets her man...
jon08 chapter 6 . 4/2
Love the way of getting rid of Tonks in the bank...
tricorvus chapter 20 . 3/23
I bloody loved this. I admire that you spelled only 2 names wrong, considering how many you had to remember. Grindelwald & Lily. Remember the Evans girls were both named for flowers :)
I will continue reading your works
Rock on
cdunphy457gmail chapter 20 . 3/19
great story enjoyed it a bunch the beginning was pretty dark but you did a good job of bringing it for the effort
CD
Guest chapter 20 . 3/13
Very good. I really liked the ending!
InwoodHp chapter 20 . 3/14
Bloody fantastic
ProudPatel chapter 11 . 3/14
How the f*ck is Hermione allowed to kee her original surname? Even if she keeps her surname, then she has to fuse it with Harry's, meaning her surname would be Granger-Potter. You have given too much leeway to Hermione here. Getting completely violated by the Weasel and even then, having the balls to do whatever she wants to in her marriage with Harry.
ProudPatel chapter 10 . 3/14
Loved Daphne and Harry! However, Hermione and Harry should have been like brother sister instead of becoming lovers. I don't know why Harry likes damaged goods so much. I couldn't help but notice that you always mention Daphne as Daphne Black but you never mention Hermione as Hermione Potter. Also, Daphne always proclaims herself to be Mrs. Black but Hermione never says that she is Mrs. Potter. In the starting of this chapter, you wrote," Hermione Granger the Lady Potter and Daphne Black nee Greengrass the Lady Black". What's with that bias? It should be Hermione Potter nee Granger.
Guest chapter 20 . 3/9
I hate daphne. I HATE IT. HATE HATE HATE IT. It doesn't deserve a gender. Grr.
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