|Reviews for Homecoming|
| Guest chapter 4 . 1/7/2013
I don't know who to trust!
| thesunwillshineclear chapter 9 . 4/14/2011
You made me laugh and almost teary eyed during this chapter and I love that when it happens!
*runs to get sprinkled animal crackers*
| TTCyclone chapter 9 . 6/10/2010
xD I'm gonna have to remember that animal cracker line for later. Love this! Too bad it's over..:(
| TTCyclone chapter 4 . 6/9/2010
"Dun-Dun-Dun" is RIGHT! Ugh I wanna read more but I'm too tired...This (and all ur other stories) is great!
| anon chapter 9 . 3/22/2010
What a wonderful story. I really love the way your established the characters around their relationships. I love Ben and Riley friendship fics, because there are a lot but not nearly enough of the absolutely well-written ones (like yours). I hope that this isn't the last that we see of Rick, because it'd be great to see some scenes between him and Ben as well (perhaps ganging up on RIley, the way big brothers do on the youngest siblings), and more of him and Riley.
What can I say? Riley's my favorite and you really seem to bring out the best in him. Great story. Thanks
Oh, and the snark was top-notch. XD Animal crackers indeed.
| trecebo chapter 9 . 1/1/2010
Aw, Ri has a bro and a family and stuff, and cookies, and it's all good, and I'm seriously grinning and writing a long, run-on sentence, and gosh, I don't know if I've conveyed just how much Ben and Riley are terribly cool as brothers because...they just ARE.
| IamThePasserby chapter 9 . 12/30/2009
goodness gracious i think i love you.
ok, read your bio, and one, you love jesus, which makes me just thrilled, two, you've seen What's Up Doc, which is one of my all-time favorite movies in the history of forever and a half (Eunice, that's a person named Eunice...), and third, this fic just made my eyes all watery and whatnot with emotion over the angst and resolution and brotherly love and sincerity and happy ending and oh good lord!
geez. i think you're my new favorite person.
- Alanah C
| Luzith chapter 9 . 12/8/2009
| Kelcor chapter 9 . 10/12/2009
Wow! I had read your MacGyver stories about Grant but had never seen National Treasure (though I've wanted to since the first one was released to theatres!), so I figured I wouldn't recognize the characters very well... WRONG! I took a chance and, again, Wow! Great job! You have me wanting to see the NT movies even MORE now! I'm gonna have to go out an buy the movie asap! :o) Thanks for a truly wonderful read! Now, I must move onto your next page turner! Thanks again, and God Bless! :o)
PS Nice to also meet someone else who knows there is a difference between being a Christian and being religion... MANY differences! :o)
| Ihni chapter 9 . 7/17/2009
That's so sweet. I was confused there for a while and thought that Rick was the bad guy. Should have known better. Brothers just don't DO that. Except for in the bible. You know.
Anyway! Good story. Thank you.
| supergirl3684 chapter 1 . 4/30/2009
NICE! i'm glad ben didn't leave him alone!
| Faryn Katz chapter 9 . 12/29/2008
| magdilen chapter 9 . 8/31/2008
That was a nice blend of angst and action goodness. Thanks.
| andi chapter 9 . 3/3/2008
I laughed - I cried - mostly laughed - a lot:)
Great story - you captured them well:)
And I agree with Riley - if you have animal crackers you can't help but be happy:)
| MikiNare chapter 9 . 1/27/2008
Favourite National Treasure fic ever ever ever. Oh man, so GOOD. Please please write more NT fics. You have such talent for them. Haha.