Reviews for SasoDei: Intruder
Guest chapter 3 . 12/26/2012
I expect Dei-Chana's taking the pregnancy
Guest chapter 2 . 12/26/2012
Guest chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
Lolzzzzzzzz,I like the OCC
DeeaE chapter 6 . 1/17/2011
love this storyyyyyyyyy!
America is Awesome chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
Ah HaHaHA! "Itachi paled and said nothing" I love it! That's my absolute favorite line... so subtle.

Wa ha ha!

once-upon-a-dream012 chapter 6 . 1/17/2010
s'good :)
Ame chapter 5 . 1/10/2010
W00T! MADARA!I HAD A DREAM I RAPED HIM! I was scared (he was small...)
black55widow chapter 1 . 1/9/2010
I never read the first version but the sex was quite good in this chapter.
Okarilia chapter 5 . 3/6/2009
xD! hilarius!

(I don't like yuri... thrue is I hate it...)

but I love the yaoi!

ok... continue! please? n.n?

Ninjashallow chapter 5 . 1/8/2009
hey i just read your chapters and some of the reviews and i think wat they said are crazy-I LOVE YOUR STORY! i love how you protray the characters, how the talk, the hot yaoi scenes between sas and dei (
hex chapter 5 . 5/10/2008
more more more

tis good
ThiefSuzy chapter 5 . 2/23/2008
...ah, shit! love-triangle coming! XO

...just kiddin'! XD

it's not like your char is main, it's just... some of the other Akatsuki's are not much in the fic... but, it's very hard to put alot of chars in a fic, and STILL make something happend, if the chappies are short... .

...ya gettin' bad reviews? :O


anyway, keep the good work up, and if Suzy confuses you, Suzy blames the Coco-top's... .

Greendayluvr93 chapter 5 . 2/22/2008
aha plz update soon. ill be waiting
CrawlingInTheDark657 chapter 4 . 2/22/2008
That...was...weird. Good...but weird.
CrawlingInTheDark657 chapter 1 . 2/22/2008
Tobi is actually Obito. He says that he has the power of Madra not that he is Madra. And if Madra was still alive he would have to be like... how old right? How old would he be? He would be dead wouldn't he? At least there is a chance that Obito got out alive right? I have officially confused myself, but I stick with my original statement. TobiObito! Yeah,un!
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