Reviews for The First Time
Ai-Chan chapter 1 . 9/28/2008
That was really adorable )
sashlea chapter 1 . 10/2/2007
loved the story, especially Aiden's questioning Zel about where babies come from
Humor Queen Merc chapter 1 . 10/2/2007
Hehehe, forgot to review this earlier, but you know how much I love your fics!
Fenikkusuken chapter 1 . 10/1/2007
*snickering gleefully* Too Much Fun!

The dialogue in this keeled me!
Virginia chapter 1 . 9/30/2007
lol I laughed so much while reading this story _ I just love your fics about family life of Lina and Gourry. Especially I liked the part with stork thing, lol I nearly fell of my chair. I hope to see more stories like this in future.

P.S. They never change _
Catgirl the Crazy chapter 1 . 9/29/2007
*is laughing too hard to say any thing coherant*
linagabriev chapter 1 . 9/29/2007
This story had me grinning from ear to ear by the end. I truly enjoyed this story. It was satisfying and terribly cute. I love little Aiden, and of course Lina and Gourry's threats to reveal each other's embarassing stories. Wonderful job.
Gerao-A chapter 1 . 9/29/2007
Sunny: its been 20 years and Lina and Gourry will absolutaly never change. now way.

Ramon:that is good to see.

Air Jay: I can even think of a million diferent stories of how to embarrase Rock-face.

Maliska: I think you mean Zelgadiss.

Air JAy: What ever.

Alandra: and the kids were cute and funny, just like their parents. but we haven't seen Zel and Amelia's kids