Reviews for Eternity in Death
Guest chapter 1 . 11/3/2013
Oh my good! I love it!
BirdsOfFreedom chapter 1 . 5/23/2013
Awwww, this is so beautiful I'm crying A truly heart touching story, absolutely loved it :D
tk04 chapter 1 . 10/26/2012
Wow not bad. Though i kind feel it was to easy for him. Oh well i still like it how you end the story. Thank you!
melodyz07 chapter 1 . 12/27/2009
Gosh I really though from the first paragraph that Wolfram died

Haha you tricked us with such a beginning

Very original XD

Other than that;

Beautiful chapter full of emotions.

I am really happy for Wolfram and Yuuri :)

Very sweet and hopeful ending.
emeraldsmile chapter 1 . 10/31/2009
I love very much these lines _

The greatest gift of life is love…

…the greatest punishment is love unrequited…

…but greatest anguish is the loss of love…

…a love you never thought you had.

may be can I borrow these lines...?

that If you permit it?
20eKuRaN15 chapter 1 . 9/17/2009
Very heartwarming in the end... Made me ry.. I was so happy that they sill ended up together..
getaiyou chapter 1 . 3/29/2009
That was amazing. It may not be much but I made me shed tears.

I am relatively happy for them. Only relatively because it took him so goddamn long to figure it out.

He is unbelievable.

Wolfram is a such a dear though. He is a very special person.

It nearly broke my heart to see him so broken like that.
Lemonysh chapter 1 . 2/26/2009
sweet and cute. just like Yuuri to be manipulated by a book :)lol
LostForWords07 chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
Aw... that was so beautiful and well-written... I love it.
Ongaku Neko chapter 1 . 12/10/2008
Aw, so sweet and very well written. Thanks for sharing! XD
Random Reader chapter 1 . 6/1/2008
It was beautiful; an absolutely wonderful mixture of romance and drama. I'm sorry I have to leave an anonymous review, but my friend is a homophobe and I seriously don't want her to find out. Thank you.
Sheinah chapter 1 . 2/15/2008
What? I never left a review on this fic? I can't believe it! It must be like, what, the third time I read it and I never told you how much I love it. The emotions your fic makes me feel... my heart was clenching all the way. I mean, each time I read your fic, I'm totally into it and I become unaware of the world around me. I'm just lost in it. It's beautiful, sad, amazing, and so much more. I simply love it. You conveyed their emotions so well... I hope you'll write more about them, your writing skills are wonderful.
Gabby0214 chapter 1 . 12/6/2007
Simply Amazing, all my emotions drawn into this Job, Gabby
Stephke23 chapter 1 . 11/29/2007
This was beautiful and a creative way for Yuuri to find out his feelings. I liked it a lot. Good job!
kasmo chapter 1 . 11/7/2007
I like the quote at the beginning the most:

The greatest gift of life is love…

…the greatest punishment is love unrequited…

…but greatest anguish is the loss of love…

…a love you never thought you had.

It really fit well with the story. However, I noticed that when you repeated it later when incorporating it in the story that you mispelled 'loss'.

I'm glad this wasn't an actual character death, but that it still helped shake some sense into Yuuri. He's so frustrating with his continued denials.

I'm also confused as to this dream you're referring to. I thought Yuuri was reading a book and was imagining himself and Wolfram in the characters' places? Was the dream a separate thing that happened?

Or maybe you're using 'dream' in the wrong context. It would be less confusing perhaps if you used 'you're imagining things' or 'it's all in your head' or something. Dreaming sort of implies sleep. Well, unless Yuuri was sleeping, but he seemed awake to me.
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