Reviews for Closure
doc boy chapter 8 . 5/17/2017
As sweet as it was I'm sorry to say I found the ending rather unsatisfying. You've been building up the tension the whole time. The least you could have done was have them say they love each other and not just like each other. It would be far more rewarding. We know it wasn't just liking. The payoff could have been more warm fluffy and touching but maybe that's just my opinion...
doc boy chapter 7 . 5/17/2017
I don't think they can beat around the bush much longer. I feel a confession coming on. Also as nasty as Ginny was, she was still in a fragile mood. I think Harry could have been a little nicer and more gentle about it but that's the way it is
doc boy chapter 6 . 5/17/2017
I think that Hermione was always like a motherly figure to him aside from just a friend, or in the this case a romantic interest. Yet they still make a great match without it being creepy because their personalities match
doc boy chapter 5 . 5/17/2017
Longing for his love... I get the feeling he's setting up a house for him and Hermione to live in as more than just friends. Maybe fall in love and raise a family. I hope she's okay though
doc boy chapter 4 . 5/17/2017
He's a lucky guy
doc boy chapter 3 . 5/17/2017
Looking good. I can feel the tension in the air
doc boy chapter 2 . 5/17/2017
Very well written. As a Jew I can tell you that Harry's dillema of what to do or where to go after the war is over and everything's he's been through, reminds me of how the Jews who survived the Holocaust felt after they were liberated from the camps. Like in the movie Shindler's List. Well played
doc boy chapter 1 . 5/17/2017
Harsh. I don't blame Harry for feeling the way he does. Looking forward to see where this develops
Guest chapter 8 . 2/9/2017
that was something it possible to give someone a hug mentally, cause if i knew you personally i would give you hug for writing this brilliant story.
FuN FiFi chapter 8 . 1/3/2017
What a brilliant post-DH story, Harmony-style! I love your portrayals of both Harry and Hermione, even Ron who some writers tend to butcher in order to make HHr happen, but thankfully you weren't one of them! I always thought that HHr should've gotten together in the HP series, but JK Rowling didn't take that chance despite having so many reasons! You took that chance and showed us how HHr could happen in a realistic manner, after all was said and done in the final book. You're a talented writer, and definitely a true Harmonian! I'm so glad I found your wonderful story on this site! Kudos to you on a job well done! :-)
The Ghostly Minion chapter 8 . 12/21/2014
Other than still wondering what happened in
Australia, this story is perfect Harmony.

D. Page Robin
The Ghostly Minion chapter 7 . 12/21/2014
Your treatment of the Funeral is great. Exactly what Fred would have wanted.

Harry and Hermione together was perfect.

I don't ever feel much sympathy for Ginny, but you even managed that. I think is was the hope against hope that Harry would came back to her that kept her together from Dumbledore's funeral to Fred's. Now she knows that hope was futile.

Well done.

D. Page Robin
The Ghostly Minion chapter 6 . 12/21/2014
For what we've seen of them this is a perfect reunion. After the funeral, they still have to talk about Australia and then themselves.

D. Page Robin
The Ghostly Minion chapter 5 . 12/21/2014
Maybe one of the bravest things Harry's done; moving on and remaking #12 without Hermione there to support him.

D. Page Robin
The Ghostly Minion chapter 4 . 12/21/2014
Even though they will be parted, I think they've both declared they feelings for the other. I think They both know they have too.

D. Page Robin
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