|Reviews for Legends, Part 3: The Mansion Incident|
| The Fox Familiar chapter 3 . 4/22/2011
Lisa! She's one of my favourite RE characters. I love how you've portrayed her, and so well early in the story!
You have to be one of my most favourite authors here. You are excellent and I love the realism and horror you add. If RE could be re-done with such masterful horror, I'd hire you! These are the greatest takes on RE I've ever read, seriously.
| 2ndsly chapter 41 . 3/7/2011
I /love/ what your doing with Lisa. She's actually one of my favorite characters in RE.
I'm moving my way through your series, and I'm impressed. Nothing more to that that hasn't already been said.
Another favorite is Rebecca, I would have liked to see more of her in this volume but I still like the way you handled her part.
Back to Lisa, I'm expecting a certain event in part 5 or 6. I will not mention it specifically here to avoid too much spoiling for people who read review before the story.
I will be /very/ disappointed if this event docent happen.
| cjjs chapter 41 . 11/9/2009
What a great read. You managed to take what was essentially a bad B Movie horror script and turn it into something genuinely frightening and personal, great job with that!
I was a little suprised with how you portrayed Jill, she was quite a bit more fragile and (for lack of a better word, weak) than I had expected. She sort of reminded me of Shelly Duvall from Kubric's "The Shining" and personally I didn't care for it. However her reactions were realistic, given the situation she had been placed in, and it fleshed out her character, making her more human and falliable (always a good thing) So, despite my personal misgivings in the direction that you took her character, I'm still glad that you took it.
The final battle with the Tyrant was also very well done, yuo really managed to portray it in all it's unstoppable, unfeeling, terror inspring glory, so good job.
One final thing, your writing, however violent the subject matter may be, never comes off as being gratuitously gory (which I think is great)
Great work, I'm off to read your next installment!
| cjjs chapter 38 . 11/9/2009
Thank God Brad decided to show.
| cjjs chapter 37 . 11/9/2009
Poor Barry, I'm a little pissed that he died, but it is good drama. Though I'm not sure if I would want to live if my family had been murdered either.
I only hope that Nicholai will get his comuppance at some point.
| cjjs chapter 35 . 11/9/2009
Uh oh! Who would have thought that injecting yourself with a mystery virus would be a less than good idea? lol.
| xSummonerYunax chapter 6 . 11/5/2009
Having read this far, I must comment and say that it's so wonderful so far. You're really nailing the characters, and I was especially impressed at how you wrote Wesker's anger towards the dent in his plan and his frustration towards Barry. Very well done! You managed to really show his full rage without profusely using descriptions. It was clear and to the point, direct, just like Wesker.
Aside from that, I find your descriptions of the mansion, surroundings, environments, etc especially powerful as well. Very vivid! I read a little of this fic each night and will go through your entire saga!
I'll leave more reviews later. I cannot tell you how much I am enjoying this!
| cjjs chapter 22 . 10/28/2009
I..just...love the Lisa chapters.
| cjjs chapter 19 . 10/24/2009
I absolutely love your take on Lisa Trevor, pitiful, bit horrifying. fantastic!
| cjjs chapter 10 . 10/21/2009
WoW! Go Barry! Going toe to toe with Lisa Trevor? Simply amazing, Mr. Burton definitely deserves his place in the STARS team.
| cjjs chapter 8 . 10/20/2009
Okay, back to reading this guy. (after a brief hiatus. lol.) I really really like how you are portraying the characters. All of them are extremely competent, the stuff you would expect from an elite law enforcement agency.
| cjjs chapter 7 . 9/12/2009
Okay, I finally got around to reading Part Three, so far, so good. Even though I know exactly how the mansion incident unfolds, I am still on the edge of my seat, as if I am experiencing it for the first time. Nicely done!
| Ace chapter 41 . 8/7/2009
| Ace chapter 41 . 8/7/2009
one word AWESOME!
| Sythlia chapter 41 . 4/19/2009
Three down, now to the fourth. :) The writing continues to enslave me to read it further. Also, it was interesting to see Lisa get her own POV. Time to read further. :)