Reviews for Helping Harry
Guest chapter 4 . 5/17/2015
nice story just the paragraph breaks are odd and it seems a bit rushed. easy fixes though! keep writing!
-ellie_longliveharrypotter (will have an account soon)
Guest chapter 5 . 5/3/2015
ONLY THE CANDOR USE TRUTH POTIONS
UMBRIDGE MUST BE A CANDOR
IN DISGUISE...
The Queen of Nope chapter 5 . 2/1/2015
No, Harry, they do care, listen to them
True puff chapter 4 . 1/10/2015
I love all of this. Great work. Hope there's more :)
gleefan2009 chapter 5 . 9/1/2014
Love it please write more
LunaticLuna chapter 5 . 6/12/2014
The spelling is: Veritaserum
MiaHominaTelosWrit chapter 1 . 4/26/2014
The plot is interesting. But, your formatting isn't there. REMEBER quoations and you'll be golden.
Lozzit chapter 2 . 11/18/2012
Lol that just shows how retarded (sorry if this word offends anyone, but it's true, he is) Vernon is. I can't believe how careless he was to get blood on the letter rofl. But you got the spelling of Ickle Ronniekins and Diagon Alley right :)
Lozzit chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
Hi, it's a good start, but why are there so many paragraphs? They are sometimes in the middle of sentences and its annoying. Don't know if its my iPod I'm reading this on or it's you, but its never happened before and I was reading a different fanfic just two minutes ago. Please revise and fix if possible :)
ally chapter 1 . 10/25/2012
ideas are good the style it is written is, isnt.
Supernatural-Girl17 chapter 5 . 5/28/2012
LOVE THIS STORY AND CHAPTER SO FAR! HOPING TO READ MORE OF THIS STORY LATER! HOPE SO AND CAN'T WAIT! :) 3
V. L. Crawford chapter 5 . 2/6/2011
I wish there was more to this story.
V. L. Crawford chapter 4 . 2/6/2011
I am glad that Harry is save with Sirius and Remus.
V. L. Crawford chapter 3 . 2/6/2011
Please keep writing on this story.
V. L. Crawford chapter 2 . 2/6/2011
Please let Sirius save Harry.
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