Reviews for Immortal
purplehippopotamus47 chapter 15 . 11/25/2009
Thalia has blue eyes. And... if Hercules is a child of Zues like Thalia, Then he should have Blue eyes, too. Great story, can't wait to finish reading it :D
purplehippopotamus47 chapter 3 . 11/25/2009

... i think
jackbyang7 chapter 17 . 7/11/2009
nice! really nice story! strike that not nice! it's great!
skkg chapter 16 . 5/26/2009
ok i know i reviewed already. anyway, could you maybe consider making a sequel for this story? pretty please? i would so luv to know what hapens next. consider it!

XOXO, SerenaRocks997 ;)
skkg chapter 17 . 5/26/2009
ok this is so good and come it's... i can't even explain it with words. i am so recomending this fanfic to everyone i know! thnx for a great fanfic! write more!

XOXO, SerenaRocks997 ;)
The New Ace of Spies chapter 17 . 5/14/2009
OMG I LOVE IT! You should write a sequal
Laughing-like-Bells chapter 17 . 5/13/2009
I loved the fact that Apollo and Hebe got together. Better then Herc the Jerk. I also loved how you used the elements from the Last Olympian in this! It was awesome!
bri chapter 16 . 5/10/2009
please write more
TLORocks chapter 16 . 5/8/2009
Update already!
The New Ace of Spies chapter 16 . 4/23/2009
OMG THAT WAS AWESOME! But does Hebe die? please uppdate!
Laughing-like-Bells chapter 16 . 4/23/2009
GAH! It had me smiling the whole time. Again, ROCKING-NESS! Hebe is so cool. HAHA! PERCABETH! I had candy before I read this and I'm hyper. I'M SORRY! WOHT! THIS ROCKZ!

Your very hyper friend,

WiseGirl726 chapter 16 . 4/23/2009
i did like this chapter i cant belive that percy finaly asked her out chapter 16 . 4/22/2009
that was long it was a really good action sequence though some people can write it most can;t but that was really good I Want to know what Annabeth says so update soon cheers

WiseGirl726 chapter 15 . 3/9/2009
awsome i love the story
ApalcalypticBunny42 chapter 15 . 3/1/2009
is there percabeth? Major? Sex?
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