Please update

Oh man. I love this one too. I don’t think I even ever thought of how or why Cross has Maria or if it was mentioned un the manga. This story is definitely not as heartfelt as Mana’s but I still love it xD I know it’s been a little over a year since your last update, but I hope you are planning to continue this one if there is still more to add. I look forward to it! Again thank you for writing and sharing your work :)

I'm glad you're back! I always enjoined your writing, and loved your style. Thank you

ohh i've been following this since Mana and i'm so, so glad this updated! THANK YOU

"Like all magic, it was simple enough to be stupid."
- this made me laugh in the middle of all that creepiness with Maria's corpse. I swear i never looked at it the same after reading your take on it

This entire chapter was delicious xD brimming with tension, nothing *explicit* but the meaning is crystal-clear!

Once again, thank you for the update! Your writing style is as clean and as enjoyable as i remember :) take care and happy writing!

*sweatdrops* Poor Allen, he has it rough. Well...please continue this story...if you could. *bows*

Love your story now following! . Please update soon!

God i swear you are evilll. I am so into this fic that its not even funny.

Update it soon i beg of you

i want to know what next? O.O too curious

Please update!

Please update soon ;-;

Jesus Christ, I actually had to remind myself that Allen had an immunity to the bullets as I read through the second part of the chapter . Then I started smiling when Cross tried to comfort him :) I can start seeing hints of Cross actually caring for Allen's well-being :)

It was nice that Cross managed to feel a smidgen of guilt xD Sure, he reverted back to a bastard later, but still...On a sidenote, it's interesting to see how Allen is slowly growing up :)

I like how...distinct Cross's personality is. He's a complete jerk, but that's what makes him interesting ;)

I found the prequel to this yesterday, practically devoured the thing, and then I found this...and you have no idea how happy you have made me :D Words can't describe how much I am looking forward to this

This is the last story of yours that I've read, and I love it. It's very clever how you piece things together and make small connections between one big picture. Will Cross find out that Allen has the Fourteenth's will soon? The suspense in this story kills me sometimes. Well, I feel like I know how Allen attracts men, but how does he attract women? Women that aren't like Maddie and other whores that lust after him or just care for him in a platonic way. I'm thinking more along the lines of girls in the streets, Lenalee, or even Rhode. Allen certainly has an interesting affect on people. Update again soon!