Reviews for Lonely Captive
Two Limes in a Coconut chapter 1 . 3/11/2008
When you said you were really good at writing this kind of stuff... you were serious weren't you? I mean that was really good.

Poor, poor,Christophe...
AbsoluteTrash chapter 1 . 10/6/2007
Congradulations, H'! You made me cry. Again. ::sniffles:: Take that as a complament.

Poor, poor Christophe. Twas a promise he could not keep. D:
FPWAaBTGWIS chapter 1 . 10/4/2007
Very, very cool. Interesting idea too! Again, as to be expected, I could picture everything PERFECTLY! But I'm still not sure if he was just sleeping... or he died. I'm kinda going with sleeping, but I'm not completely sure. Maybe we're not supossed to know.

Anyhow, it was still really neat and original!



Poor Chris
Bubbly-TheFerret chapter 1 . 10/3/2007
ZOMG, I love this story. You left it at kind of a cliffy though. You should deffinatly continue this story with at least one more chapter. That would be soo cool. Though the ending paragraph could be saying that he died cause he didn't hear the alerts. Ah Well try to continue I loved it!