|Reviews for Ashes|
| Alisabeth chapter 14 . 2/1
I love how Jake is protective of Sam and is serious about beating Gabe. I cant wait to read more :)
| horse girl528 chapter 14 . 1/19
you have to write more, pleas
| sam chapter 14 . 1/6
its been like two years, whats up?
i wanna read the next chapter, i looove this fanfic
| horselovr2000 chapter 14 . 11/7/2013
Update please! :)
| DarkAngel1213 chapter 14 . 8/22/2013
Please update this, please?
| Sparxfly93 chapter 14 . 7/21/2013
Hey just wondering if you're going to update soon. It's been a while but I'm still following this story and I come back to reread it every now and then since I put it in my follow list over a year ago.
| anyaandsolomon97 chapter 14 . 3/26/2013
I like this story please finish it! :)
| Neverstopreading chapter 14 . 12/20/2012
Wow I love your story I can never find a story I like on this site congrats you r my number 1 favorite author now
Ps congrats on wanting to Be a vet
I 3 horses
| Horse Addict chapter 14 . 10/20/2012
First of all, your story is absolutely amazing! I can honestly say its my favorite fanfic out here! I have reread all the chapters so many times i think i could quote it! The last chapter was especially my favorite! You are so so talented! Take your time, we all realize how stressful life is. I admire how you take your time to update, but when you do, it's amazing! That's much better than just throwing something out here to say you've updated. So thank you!
Your story plot is really really good! As I said above, best story out here! I love how you portray each of the individual characters. Especially Jake and Sam! I love Jake being protective of her :) Im so so so glad that you aren't pushing the romance thing and are sticking to the close friends that can trust each other! In my opinion, that is one reason your story is so strong and unique. I really hope you stick to this, I do believe it will help your story stay so successful! Another thing I really like about your story is how easily I can get into it! I don't know what it is that's different, but I always find myself so into your story, feeling like I'm there with the characters, feeling their joy and pain with them! So thank you for that too!
Well, I have taken enough of your time, so thank you for the great story and good luck! Just keep going! Your doing amazing so far :)
| Athena Silverwolf chapter 14 . 10/16/2012
please write more! okay, i'm going to try to make some sense. I like the way Jake is silently really protective of Sam. I love the way you turned the characters into something else entirely. I really like that the coach is always exstatic(prob spelled wrong, I have dyslexia) I enjoy that Gabe is the rival. Is there going to be any brother-sister/sister-sister bonding? I think the whole sibling thing can really play a big part in healing Sam, and I'd love to see more. I got an idea while I was reading this of Darrell getting really protective of Sam too, is there any chance of seeing that? Anyway, awesome story!
| RiverBendCowgirl chapter 14 . 9/29/2012
Please keep writing! I think you can really make this a top story! I love the theme, it is such a unique plot! :D Please update soon!
| RizReviewer chapter 14 . 9/10/2012
Wow! I just found this story, but the plot is awesome! How did you ever think of Sam being mute? I can't wait for the next chapter! Oh, btw great job keeping Jake in character. When is Sam going to wake up realize what a great guy he is?
| Gueststar chapter 14 . 8/26/2012
Amazing story! By far the best one out here! This last chapter is my favorite one so far, although all are very good! Keep up the great work and please please update soon! :)
| Guest chapter 14 . 8/25/2012
Love this story! Please update soon! Please!
| Daughterof8 chapter 14 . 8/27/2012
I hope you can keep this going, too. I really really like this story, and it would be awful if it's never finished. I hope you can update again soon!