Reviews for The Betrayal
Aishah658 chapter 2 . 4/4
hi
Cricstar07 chapter 18 . 1/6
Really good story. I loved it all. The way you started kept me reading till the end. Well done!
Guest chapter 18 . 3/5/2015
UPDATE!
Gothic Rain chapter 9 . 7/21/2014
So sad...
Guest chapter 18 . 6/16/2014
Meh. You made the ending seem like nothing happened, like it was a fairy tale. Not my kind if ending but good overall
Las chapter 18 . 4/8/2014
Awwww how cute those spars are :3
Gold Testament chapter 6 . 2/9/2014
Usuratonkachi also means loser.
Guest chapter 9 . 4/13/2013
Fucking retard fiction
thecartoongirl22 chapter 18 . 11/25/2012
awesome story i loved it
dann chapter 18 . 9/20/2011
Not a bad story I'll give u that but the narutoxsakura is bullshit never put naruto with sakura ever they suck together I mean anyone but her
Cold Flash chapter 7 . 2/8/2010
I expected better but got nothing but a Naruto lap dog- How Pathetic of you.
jesi ki kage chapter 18 . 12/1/2009
I LOVE IT! THAT WAS JUST PLAIN AWESOME! I COULDN'T STOP LAUGHING! OH THATS A GREAT STORY! THANK YOU FOR WRITING AND PLEASE CONTINUE TO WRITE HILARIOUS MASTERPIECES!
anon hate chapter 1 . 8/26/2009
I think the chapter went too fast. There could have been more discription, but there where very few typos. The plot is already developing, even in the first chapter! Good job. I t sounds very interesting, though it was a bit hard to follow. Still a good job. ;)
Djmidziulis chapter 18 . 6/19/2009
Nice story. But it could be more longer, becouse i am sad that your story is over...
xxnarufanxx chapter 18 . 5/15/2009
hey i read your fic in one day and i think its awesome!

i really liked it
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