Reviews for Poison Apple
Squarky chapter 1 . 12/29/2023
Hey guys, for the missing chapters (4 and 5) you can read it on the website Wayback Machine!
Confused chapter 4 . 12/11/2023
This fanfic has chapters missing. Apparently, at least chapter 4 and 5, that’s why the chapter marked as 4 doesn’t make sense. I’d love to read the original, complete, again. Such a loss.
aj chapter 4 . 5/8/2023
I’m really confused. I feel like I’m missing a chapter or something? They keep talking about “what happened last night” but nothing happened in chapter 3 except the kiss. Is it implied in the beginning? I thought the beginning was just a dream, but maybe I’m just stupid and can’t comprehend things.
Chusii chapter 24 . 4/24/2023
we lost light to his delusions somewhere xD
jaron5 chapter 3 . 8/26/2022
You guys are amazing. I'm crying literal tears at the thought of Matsuda being Kira ahahaha
broken5pieces chapter 2 . 8/25/2022
Lmfao that's the best thing he could have said. Both of them gained points in this chapter
Dot chapter 1 . 6/13/2022
Have large parts of this been removed? I'm totally lost.
Guest chapter 22 . 6/9/2022
i love this very much!
A chapter 4 . 1/31/2022
I read thru the reviews on this chapter, and although i agree with lots of them, i am somewhat confused as to why people are painting light as the villain and L as the victim? It was stated several times in this chapter that L raped light first… it just wasn’t written explicitly and only in passing thought. Maybe people didnt notice, idk, but they are equally villains in this fic, man.
aluminawhisper chapter 31 . 7/24/2021
Listen, I have no clue if you two even check up on this story anymore, but if you ever do, I need to say something. I first picked up this fic back in January of this year, nearly fourteen years after it’s initial release. It made me cry, laugh, and feel all kinds of things—it’s genuinely a masterpiece. You two should be so proud to have made this. It will forever be a treasured piece of the Death Note fandom. Thank you so much for everything. I hope life has treated you both well. -M
madeline chapter 31 . 5/18/2021
Hi there. this is such an old fic and i doubt you two even check this ancient website but wow. thank you. for writing this, for all the crying and the laughing and the twists— this story is just so beautiful. really. i loved it. act 1 has got to be my favorite. they’re so tragic. gonna cry forever because of this
Mileybee chapter 31 . 3/17/2021
When I saw this update I thought my fan fiction profile glitched at first but then I screamed-
Axelerate13 chapter 1 . 3/2/2021
I read this fic back in 2009/2010. Over a decade later, I still think about it regularly. I remember its ending with crystal-clear clarity. The title of chapter 4, Glass Coffin, is as memorable to me as the fic's title. I judge other stories by if they are as gripping as this one, which had me keeping the web browser on my DSi open to it 24/7 for about a week, pulling all-nighters to read and only putting it down to go to classes. My attention was drawn back to FFN after a fav notification for one of my old stories (under a different username; I'm posting this under the one I use now on other sites) and the first thing I did was see if I had fav'd this one so I could look it over once more. If you judge stories by how long they stick with you, how they inspire and haunt you, how much of an impact they have, then consider this one of the best of all time. Its longevity in my mind cannot be beat & I wanted to let the authors know it's still in my heart to this day.
AngelousPoofy chapter 6 . 1/7/2021
"I don't care either."

And that, my friends, when my whole mind collapsed. THIS CHAPTER IS MY FAVORITE ONE SO FARRR UGHH
AngelousPoofy chapter 5 . 1/7/2021
Oh my god what the fuck are they doing
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