|Reviews for Transferred|
| Sonar chapter 1 . 3/21/2008
Good job but it is spelled Fuery. Other than that, I don't think I seen Falman spelled wrong. At least he did not fall man. Get it? I know bad pun but it was okay.
| Took-Baggins chapter 3 . 1/31/2008
i've always loved Feury. and Hawkeye. heck, all of them.
anyway...this was a nice little fic. i enjoyed seeing everyone's reactions!
| Took-Baggins chapter 2 . 1/31/2008
constantly watching out for everybody. i'd have expected him to react more like Falman did, but i suppose Breda's the sort of guy to act quickly when this sort of thing happens.
| Took-Baggins chapter 1 . 1/31/2008
he sounds a bit shocked. i can't help hoping these guys will all end up together again in a later chapter. guess we'll have to wait and see, huh?
i like it. it was a bit short, but we both know the length doesn't make the story _
| Ruingaraf chapter 3 . 1/9/2008
Beautiful although short, and very in-character. Completely and totally what I can see happening when they each got their letters. Excellent characterization of Breda especially, and I can totally see Fuery having great endurance for running.
Would you continue this with the others?
| Sousukes-Girl chapter 2 . 10/2/2007
Oh, unexpectedly I like this. Keep writing!