Sooooooo hair gunna work with ridly nope he fucking killed samus's parents and possibley ate them plus idly can never be trusted as I've sed twice before HE IS A SICK SADISTIC FUCK!

A peice of advice to arbitor don't medell in the affairs of a space dragon fore you ar crunchy and good with ketchup

Sooo what iv guesed drum the last chapter chair all guns team up to beat phantoon I understad why you wold like phantoon his is a cool boss and has a misterius back story but I rrreeaally want ridly to be an antagonist I just don't think I can ever root fore him as I sed in my last revew he is a sick sadistic fuck!

Soooooooo is ridly a good guy because i'v com to no him as a sick sadistick fuck who wold eat the abiter without a thought I'm not saying he woldent work with the arbiter but he wold probably be tricking him or angrily asking him about his encounter with samus aran

yet another great story, plot was great, caracters were well played and a few great plot twists. and i think i only saw one spelling error the in the whole story, another rare find, great job an i,m looking forward to the next installment of this fanfic :)

Sincerely,

Javilin Yamato

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ok first off the story sounds nice but you really need help with making paragraphs, so uber choppy and plz dont spoon feed what every cool revelation is, that makes them boring, it is more pleasing to hear the reviewer beg for it and for you to be a true author and only hint at it until it happens, though the dark arbiter is kinda cool im guessing they give him a PED unit and he will be back to some control at least. i hope the next installment neds up better

Holy shit. Ridley is a badass. I'm definitely going to be following this story.

It's awesome so far, but it's so...unbelievably...long...

Interesting.

More quibbles (Yay!) For one, the Galactic Federation (Or whatever) of Metroid has existed for far longer than 21 years. Thus, unless they were far separated, the GF and the USNC (Of Halo) should know each other. And since they are both human-based, how do they not know each other?

Also, I think Ridley is overpowered. Remember, Samus can defeat Ridley 1-on-1, so, various special abilities aside, he shouldn't be much more powerful, if at all, than Samus.

Can't wait for the next chapter (Where I can complain more!). I do like this, though. The characters seem to mesh, even if Ridley's never talked before.

Okay, NOW its making more sense. And it's developing at a good pace. Nice job. One quibble: You said that they hadn't aimed at the head, but they did with the Fuel Rod Cannons. That is, unless Kraid's face isn't on his head :P .

Eh, what? Now I'm totally confused. Didn't they fight a war (the Halo humans)? How could they fight a war while on the pirate homeworld? I was thinking different Earths... Or dimensions... But now I have no clue...

Why aren't people posting comments? I've already had over 400 people see it, and yet no one is leaving a review! (Some people are, and I thank them)

Dude, this is an awesome story. I wonder how much longer it'd take to complete it? A story like this has the potential to be really, really long. Both of the games it's based off of are known for adding surprises or missions, so I expect a really long story.

Keep up the awesome work!

wow, never thought that the arbiter would fight kraid. cool.

I think that you should have the arbiter live and somehow meet up with master chief but that's up to you.

keep up the good work!