Reviews for Tunnel
hrhrionastar chapter 1 . 11/24/2009
This is really good! Actual believable human-Sylar! Excellent!

~Riona
Erie-danna chapter 1 . 2/19/2008
Wow, this story was absolutely great! It's hard to find any fics with zane!Sylar and Mohinder before they meet up with Dale, but I was very pleased to find this.

I also like that you were able to have Sylar talk about his family history while still keeping him in "Zane mode", and how he corrects his little slip-up when he talks about taking over his father's business.

Your descriptions of the girl were also very lovely and the imagery was beautiful (in a sort of morbid way).
VampedVixen chapter 1 . 1/10/2008
I like this piece. It really shows a vulnerability to Sylar and makes me miss season one when he still had moments of being unsure like that.
Amanda Saitou chapter 1 . 10/10/2007
Very nice, a bit tragic how these two fit so well, yet cannot really be together...
desalina90 chapter 1 . 10/1/2007
wow. this was great. it's hard for anyone to do the whole "sylar on the verge of tears thing", but your version went well. it wasn't cheesy or anything. and, this might be just wrong of me to say, but your descriptions of the girl were beautiful.