Reviews for Dead Weight
Wfest chapter 12 . 11/22/2017
Too bad that you never finished this promising story. You're a very good writer, the plots, the pacing... Great!
BettyeK chapter 12 . 8/31/2017
Hi Ladelle,

I don't know if you are still writing but this was a great start to the story. I am not going to lie...I was a little worried when Minato died, but now there is nothing left to read! I hope you come back to this story. I did check the ochiba web site but got nowhere. I hope to read more soon!

Great set up and dynamics!
Guest chapter 12 . 5/29/2017
This is a 10 year-old fanfiction, so I won't be naive about the chances of it ever being completed, particularly when you don't seem to be active on this account anymore; however, I just wanted to say that this story is easily my favorite of all your WIPs.

I like the fic because the plot is so unique with Naruto being the one who is on the lam and seeking revenge, while Sasuke walks the straight and narrow. I also like the age difference because it gives their relationship an edge. In the fic, Naruto is seducing his childhood first love while simultaneously using him to get information. Naruto is younger, but he seems by far the more experienced to the two. Sasuke comes across as very sheltered. And there's so much mystery behind what Naruto and Kiba are trying to do and what really happened in the past. I desperately wanted to see how everything would turn out in the end and how you were going to solve the mysteries and tie up the plot threads.

I was also really looking forward to things getting messy between them once Sasuke finds out the truth about Naruto, namely that: he used to know Naruto, Naruto is a missing kid, Naruto is much younger than him, and Naruto is trying to kill Itachi. Each one of those revelations is shocking, but taken all together, how would Sasuke have reacted?

And what would happen once feelings start growing between them? How would Sasuke take Naruto's revelations then? On Naruto's end, would his feelings for Sasuke compromise his plans for revenge? The ending of the chapter with Naruto assuming he'd get information from Sasuke "in no time" was ironically implying things wouldn't work out that way, which means they get longer to fall in love and have the feelings grow! I was looking forward to all of this delightful messiness. :)

Other burning questions: Will Naruto get his revenge in the end, and what would it cost him to do so? What role will Sasuke play in all of this? How will he "defy the odds" to keep Naruto safe?

It's so rare to find a fanfiction with a decent plot in this fandom, that's why yours stands out, and why I haven't forgotten it after all of these years.

Hope you are doing well wherever you are!
ahans1b chapter 12 . 4/29/2017
So sad you didnt finish this story and left it when it was getting so good! It's such a unique and we'll written story. Loved every chapter.
BlackProdigy chapter 6 . 2/25/2017
Awww, poor Naruto. You'll understand...eventually.
Reader chapter 12 . 11/9/2015
OMG! OMG! OMG! I LOVE THIS FIC! PLEASE CONTINUE THIS PLEEAAASSSSSSE!
Manillalu chapter 12 . 1/5/2015
This story is freaking awesome. Freak beeping awesome. Interesting plot, dramatic, enough to get me to tears, excitement, intrigue, everything! The works! I love love love it
CuriousReader chapter 12 . 11/21/2014
Why?! Where are you Ladelle?! This is one of the best fics I've ever read, and I thought it was finished, but no.
I love the story so much! This is the first time that I've commented on a fic in , cause this history is pure GOLD. So interesting, attractive is your story, and I want more!
I hope you come back someday to update. If you do, my email is . Please sent me a message, I'll be waiting.

xxxx
Guest chapter 12 . 3/25/2014
So what happens on their date?! :D
Guest chapter 12 . 3/7/2014
Such a great fic! If you can find a spark of inspiration for it, do it! It would be a shame if it were never completed. All the characters are so interesting and the mystery plot is intriguing. And Naruto and Sasuke have CHEMISTRY, which is the best part! It's a real gem of a fic, in my opinion. :)
Shining-Dreamer chapter 12 . 8/19/2013
Dude! How have you not updated this? This is a really good story! I absolutely love it! If you have time, or even the patience for this story anymore... Please write us some more? I would really appreciate it!
Guest chapter 12 . 8/19/2013
I want more!
andysanime chapter 12 . 8/19/2013
I hope you eventually update these stories...
yaoi-creap chapter 1 . 6/14/2013
Sooooo...are you going to post a chapther or did you give up on us...that fans that cant wait to see a sign from you and youre beloved stories?I,for one ,would be veryveryvery[...]very sad if don't end this particually one...it's one of my favorites stories from ff and you 're one of my fovorites autors!
Celestialfae chapter 12 . 5/22/2013
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