Reviews for Hot Spring
Padawan13 chapter 2 . 6/21/2014
Just watched the episode and thought "there has to be a fanfiction about this - at least it is such a tempting invitation." So I went seaching and voilĂ ... I ended up here. :D
And you really deserve to be praised for this story because it is written in such a funny way that I could barely stop grinning. The characters are matched adequately and the the idea of Ichigo and Yoruichi having some "fun" together (maybe even beeing attracted to each other (this would be my favourised way)) is a very convincing one. And so I thought, I should at least tell you that you made my day (eh... very early morning ;P ) with this little fanfiction of yours and that I shuld show you my respect and gratitude for this well written story. :)

Thank you,
your Padawan13

PS: I really hope that you will continue this story at some time, but I haven't seen the following episodes, so I don't have a clue of what will happen to these two... But there is always hope. :P
Ichigo's secret lover chapter 1 . 5/12/2014
I love how you wrote the real series speech it makes it more realistic and .. I'm a huge fan of yoruichi and ichigo (two of the best bleach characters) well...I know that the next chapter is already out but I still wanted to say this. :P
Guest chapter 2 . 1/2/2014
Brilliant. You are an astounding author
KatWoman554 chapter 2 . 10/27/2013
WHAAAAT! Super L-E-M-O-N !
soulfusionresonance chapter 2 . 9/17/2013
Interesting . . .
Guest chapter 2 . 8/15/2013
i just read this story and i know you dont care but i like it.
potentialauthor18 chapter 2 . 3/9/2013
I think I busted a lung at that third line. You will hear from my lawyers. Just kidding, I don't have that kind of money. Later!
potentialauthor18 chapter 1 . 3/9/2013
The submissive thing kind of makes sense, I guess. Though it was pretty hilarious. I'm going to go ahead and assume chapter 2 is the naughty one? By popular demand...what a bunch of perverts...my people. Lol.
bleachfan chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
you should do a chapter 3 this story is so good and if posible you should do a lemon
KatzeNoel chapter 2 . 6/7/2012
LOL I had to giggle at this... I wish more people would be as adventurous with the storylines as to delve into that territory...
thisisCMpunk chapter 2 . 12/26/2011
THAT WAS AWESOMEEEEEEEEE

I LOVE IT
F8less chapter 2 . 12/22/2011
I love this. From the moment I watched the episode this story is based in I thought "This is the perfect pairing." You have reinforced my beliefs. Truly an amazing story.
Azuna10 chapter 2 . 3/15/2011
teach me how t' write stories!
GodBlues chapter 2 . 11/16/2010
*Speechless* How can someone come 3 times in a row? o.O And god, only Ichigo would think of protection after coming three whole times... I had a lot of fun readin this ;) IchiYoru is a hot pairing
RemixWriter23 chapter 1 . 6/24/2010
hey, this is good! this is the most realisticlemon ive ever red! Kept me interested and flowed from one scene to the other really well! many lemon writers tend to kinda "choppy/abrupt" when changing from lemon to normal. keep it up
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