Reviews for Give Yourself Away
NatalyMartinez48 chapter 38 . 8/12/2014
I like the end
DestroyerDRT chapter 8 . 8/18/2013
Love the fact that Hermione siblings have the same name.
Lunaris-wind chapter 38 . 3/9/2013
This review is for all 4 parts of the Never Alone series, and is posted in review for each.

I think that the undertaking here is impressive. The story stays true to characters, and to the HP universe, while crafting a completely unique story and adding many good, but maybe unneeded, noncanon characters over the four 'books'.

The story starts well, and gets better, but somewhere in Book 2 or 3, it seemed to lose its way, find it again, and get confused on multiple occasions. The final battle of Hogwarts definitely felt like that it was haphazard at best, and I had a horrible time keeping track of the action.

The relationships between characters, likewise, starts off well, and very interestingly in some cases, but begin to lose steam as a plethora of new creations are thrown into the mix.

Overall, I liked this quadrilogy, but it can be a very rocky roller coaster to read through the entire thing, with some very entertaining ups, and unfortunate downs.
Son of the Dead chapter 12 . 1/4/2013
Really good story, but just one slight thing I have to comment on:

HARRY IS EIGHTEEN AND TECHNICALLY HIM ASKING PANSY TO MARRY HIM IS ILLEGAL!
Silverwind54 chapter 14 . 8/10/2012
nice adding that one of the blinking just for curiosity did you got idea for that from a videogame or another fic?
Sailor Pandabear chapter 38 . 10/12/2011
nice
Rori Potter chapter 38 . 6/29/2010
That was a great story.
Scabbers1957 chapter 38 . 4/25/2010
This was an awesome story...can't wait to read it's sequel.

I'll add this to my favs.

:)
wizmage chapter 38 . 3/7/2010
Sweet, in case you wander what i'm doing i am saving these to my profile so i don't have to keep coming back here.
TxA-GunFighter chapter 4 . 1/29/2010
Good chapter.

gunny
TxA-GunFighter chapter 3 . 1/27/2010
Good chapter.

gunny
TxA-GunFighter chapter 2 . 1/27/2010
Good chapter.

gunny
TxA-GunFighter chapter 1 . 1/27/2010
Good chapter.

gunny
Sardonic Irony chapter 38 . 12/15/2009
Yes! Well done! This is even better than the first one. The plot is is good and convulted which makes the fic good to read. I have to say though, have you ever actually read the books? I don't mean this critically at all, only you used a lot of lines that were from the movie. I don't know... I just wondered. Anyway besides the movie lines it was a brillaint fic and well worth reading. Well done!
the naru foxxx chapter 38 . 10/22/2009
Can't wait4 the weding
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