Reviews for Onyx
Guest chapter 1 . 10/17/2016
This is crap ...
charlie-becks chapter 6 . 5/28/2009
wow my dads really simialr, her dad has a cool band that has CDs and was famous! my dad owns CDs an listens to music! i thought it was a freaky coincidence to :D
Juzzy88 chapter 6 . 8/26/2008
That was great, im glad that you posted! provides a great homework distraction!
Girlz-Rule chapter 6 . 8/26/2008
great chapter loved it :D
SingingSailor chapter 5 . 6/9/2008
Interesting premise. I'm eager to see how the story will progress. Update soon!
Rosy Nic chapter 5 . 6/9/2008
Great chapter, please update soon :)
Squam-Darnell chapter 5 . 5/11/2008
awesome!
girlz-rule chapter 5 . 3/31/2008
great chapter sry i didn't review sooner i was away for spring break with my friend update soon :D
ga-4-ever chapter 5 . 3/26/2008
So, Summer finally realized that Seth's really nice?;) and not only 'cause he's Ryan's cousin?

update soon
newportgirl22 chapter 5 . 3/23/2008
hey great chapter! I can't wait for Ryan and Marissa's date! Post soon!
Ally chapter 5 . 3/23/2008
LOVES IT! Can't wait for the next post (and more RM!)
ocgirl.fr chapter 5 . 3/23/2008
Nice chapter but not long enough lol. You should update some more soon. It'd be good to have some Ryan/Hailey time too. Also, who's Ryan's father, and does he know him?
Podoy chapter 5 . 3/23/2008
Good Chapter, I noticed this story yesterday and thought was hoping for an update some time... And well, I got what I wanted... Haha... Keep up the good work!
girlz-rule chapter 4 . 12/25/2007
love the story so far update soon please :)
starryeyesxo chapter 4 . 11/17/2007
really good! update soon, please )
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