Reviews for Your Words
pointytilly chapter 1 . 10/29/2007
This is lonely. It needs reviews.

As I (think I) said, you capture the raw emotions of fights and people in them well, and simply...and sometimes, simple works better than long and complex for angst. I do agree this could use a bit of editing later, but as a more raw piece it's shiny.

Write more. Yes, including that thing.