|Reviews for Strange Condition|
| Viviane Renard chapter 10 . 7/10/2011
This story has been one wild ride! I love the suspense of the story, and how the plot is slowly revealed to both us and Mohinder. You've done a great job with this. There's action, drama, suspense, and a little bit of heated lip-locking.
You've written the characters spot-on. I particularly love how mysterious, dangerous, and unreadable Sylar is throughout this entire story, as it shows us how clueless Mohinder is of Sylar's motivations for so long. The epilogue from Sylar's POV felt well placed. It was nice to get a brief glimpse from Sylar's perspective and get an idea of what happens after the main story ends. I particularly like that the end is really just another beginning. Poor unsuspecting Mohinder...
This entire story feels like it should be a killer episode of Heroes, one that I would love to watch over and over.
| bluerose24 chapter 10 . 2/11/2009
I hope that you are going to write a sequel to this. This is a really great story and I want to know what the drawing at the end means for Sylar and Mohinder.
| CanYouLoveTheImaginary chapter 10 . 1/27/2009
M delicious story.
Is that open end leaving room for a sequal perhaps?
Please do! One of the actually good Heroes ffics I've read so far.
| Jingying chapter 9 . 1/5/2009
Wow. That's great. I'm glad you have an epilogue added, though- I need Sylar/Mohinder closure!
| Jingying chapter 7 . 1/5/2009
Wow. Crazy cliffhanger. Is this one of those fics where you've been giving clues all along, and at the end I'm going to feel really stupid for not noticing? ;)
| Jingying chapter 5 . 1/5/2009
I really like the characterizations in your fic! So often, it's a case of "the bad guy's just misunderstood" or sudden, inexplicable love. Here, Sylar is still a bastard with a complete lack of empathy, and Mohinder is still moral and wanting nothing to do with him. I'm really interested in seeing how it turns out :)
| Jingying chapter 3 . 1/5/2009
Wow. I really like the in-depth look at Mohinder's thoughts in the beginning of this chapter. The concerns he has over dressing in Sylar's clothes are really insightful.
| Claire chapter 10 . 11/26/2008
Just read your story through in one go.
Your characterisation of your two main characters ist pretty good. And your own- this Harris guy- fits in perfect as well.
It's pretty hard to write a heroes fiction without loosing yourself in all the plotlines and powers and you did a really good job at it.
Thanks a lot for giving me such a nice time!
I'm going to check out your other stories:-)
| assassinerblue chapter 10 . 11/4/2008
Oh, Jesus. This is amazing! I must say, they were PERFECTLY in character, and the way you did Sylar's treatment of Suresh near the end was... slightly intoxicating, really. The way he drew Suresh in before they kissed, little by little, until the drawing was enacted so perfectly we could SEE it.
And I love the ending! :D
And wow, that moment when Sylar and Mohinder first recognized each other in Jake Harris' house was perfect, it was totally unexpected for both of them, and even though I knew it could only be one person I almost felt a little surprised P
Another favorite part is when Sylar tries to explain to Mohinder that he wasn't going to come after him because of the drawing, yet we could see how much it obsessed him because he had been seen with it earlier.
That scene where Mohinder fell asleep and he could feel Sylar's hair tickling his neck... it was just electric.
I'm sorry for rambling, but it was just so amazing that I wanted to go through my favorite parts... I should just say that this was absolutely amazing, as in ABSO-FREAKING-LUTELY amazing, and leave it at that :D
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| Cindre chapter 10 . 9/22/2008
I loved the kiss scene. Especially the nipple part. Very yummy. :)
| fic12 chapter 10 . 9/20/2008
Your story was amazing. The characters were very realistic and well developed. I hope u do a sequel, I know a lot of ppl who would like that.
| Kyoshiro-Crimson-King chapter 10 . 9/18/2008
awsome fic. I loved it!
| Kyoshiro-Crimson-King chapter 9 . 9/18/2008
Great chapter, Sylar was awsome!
| Oxigide chapter 8 . 9/5/2008
Amazing as usual! I liked this chapter. Kept me on the edge of my seat! Keep up the good work :D