Reviews for What If
satomika chapter 1 . 10/4/2010



but i'm wondering about leonard...


but i'll definitely stick to the sousuke/kaname pairing!
C4LYPS0 chapter 1 . 9/8/2009
James Hiwatari chapter 1 . 1/13/2008
It was good. TOkiwa made a very good point at the end.

And if I was Sousuke, I would have called that dream a nightmare.
Alucard491 chapter 1 . 11/9/2007
Kyouko's question does have some truth doesn't Loved it. Hope to see some more from ya. Good job.
junyortrakr chapter 1 . 10/14/2007
Sousuke definitely would need the help. I rather expect him to succeed, even if it's in spite of all he does.
GeneralDragon chapter 1 . 10/11/2007
Really good short fic, ingenious one liner from Kyouko at the end. Keep up the great work and i'll keep on reading.
Sousukes-Girl chapter 1 . 10/9/2007
Oh. I liked that. Write some more stories for us S&K freaks!
Where the gras is greener chapter 1 . 10/6/2007
Haha, cute :)

I can't offer much advice due to the stories shortness though. I was just wondering if Sousuke would be able to see his behaviour as not quite so normal. And I would have loved to watch his dream and impression of normal highschool life.

dylanredefined chapter 1 . 10/5/2007
Made me laugh good one
meeiwen chapter 1 . 10/5/2007
wow.. simple yet so amazing! i love the ending... it's sweet! keep up the good work! _
Hel14 chapter 1 . 10/3/2007
Very nice ! I really like your drabble. Write another one ? ;-)
Karen chapter 1 . 10/3/2007
LOL too lazy to login


i really don't think anyone CAN handle Kaname the way normal guys cope with the girls they love.

Which brings us to sousuke, and how no female can tolerate his insensitivity as well.

So, D this manly girl, and completely robotic man, are perfect for each other D

awesome short story! you should write more about them
Perpetual159 chapter 1 . 10/3/2007
Aww... that was so cute! I was giggling at the very end. The only thing wrong with it is Tokiwa's name was misspelled. It's Kyouko without the "i".