Reviews for Little Sportacus
Chris KAYLEE chapter 1 . 8/14/2013
SEE KIDS SPORTACUS STEPHANIE PLAYING OUTSIDE BALL FOOTBALL KICKBALL WALK HILL WOODS FAN
chris kaylee chapter 1 . 8/14/2013
playing outside stephiaine sportacus with new friends ball foolball sports see up in air stop airship 33 9 7 10 11
chris kaylee chapter 1 . 8/14/2013
meet sportacus stephanie 815 indiana st. martins ferry oh. airship from sky look up sports candy walk hill
MotherBear chapter 1 . 10/5/2007
What I could grasp was good, has potential to become a really good story. But, perhaps you could find someone to proofread for you? The run-on sentances make it a bit difficult to read.
Writing Therapist chapter 1 . 10/3/2007
The grammar errors distracted me quite a bit from really enjoying the story. If you cleaned it up a bit, this would be pretty good story.