Reviews for Alternate Reality
Nika Yami chapter 1 . 12/1/2023
So I read this trilogy years ago and I decided to do a small reread. I was wondering how Future Trunks fit into the picture? I wished the author showed how much more gentle Vegeta would have been with Future Trunks. Based on Bulma's character (I never liked the female bashing in this fic but oh well) Future Trunks would have been badly abused. As a huge Future Trunks fan, I am very sad at the missed opportunity.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/18/2020
why is bulma acting like a mother fucking bitch
SuperWG chapter 3 . 3/24/2018
Bulma, you know you fucked up when Roshi, the perv that is always trying to creep on women, prefers a male host to you. Lol.

Anyway, great story so far.
GokuxVegetafan4L chapter 6 . 3/8/2018
I love your story and its Segal I reread them both all the time keep up the great work
Sonadowlover05 chapter 6 . 7/29/2017
"Aff" account?
Vanitafourgoki chapter 1 . 7/26/2017
Love it ur my favorite author thank u I've searched a long time for a story like this I'd knew it be found one day the to u again glorious writer
Guest chapter 4 . 2/1/2016
Whew, oh man, I gotta tell ya, this story is seriously making me cringe. I dunno what I expected, but after reading a couple of your other stories, I expected you to provide similar quality, this takes the cake. As you very well know, Vegeta and Piccolo are the most prideful characters in DBZ and here you've managed to turn them into...dickless whimps. Maybe if you had explained from the very beginning that these two would be seriously OOC, I'd have forgiven it, but oh mercy. For some reason, I can't stop reading it knowing this fact, because I am curious to see what else you make them do. I've seen Vegeta cry ONCE, just once and that was due to massively wounded ego and injured pride at realizing that he would possibly live in Goku's shadow as his second. Yet, he's crying for...what exactly? Anyway, I doubt you'll keep this review up since its not as candy coated sweet as the rest of your reviews, but I simply had to state my opinion since I'm a die-hard DBZ fan.
Unknown2Any1 chapter 6 . 9/11/2014
I love this story, even when I first read it years ago, I still love it now.
hunterrylee chapter 7 . 7/24/2014
good story
Guest chapter 2 . 2/19/2014
I nearly cried at the end if this chapter
:"( keep up the good work
Lavonya chapter 6 . 1/13/2014
Nothing is perfect for long...
Lavonya chapter 5 . 1/13/2014
Huh... Now that you mention it, Videl is just like Chi-chi...
Lavonya chapter 4 . 1/13/2014
I like the Piccolo/Gohan pairing! I never like Videl_!
Lavonya chapter 3 . 1/13/2014
You know I think this is /thee/ BEST DBZ fic with Vegeta in it /EVER/!
Lavonya chapter 2 . 1/13/2014
This... *sniff* chapter... *sniff* is... *sniff* turning... *sniff* me... *sniff* into a... crybaby...
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