Reviews for The Beginning
Chibi Cheesecake chapter 1 . 10/5/2007
Oh man, that ending - kinda creepy, really! But awesome.

And aww, Zack! ;_; *snuggles him* That was REALLY sad. *kicks Cloud!*

Interesting little piece! X3
Kazaam chapter 1 . 10/4/2007
I thought keeping it short was very effective!

I loved the way you began this with "Hello, Cloud." It reminds me of the way Seph sounded in AC, and it seems the perfect way to start things. That still gives me shivers. XD

And I loved the impression Seph gave with the Masamune and his dramatic statement and disappearance at the end. It really makes him seem mysterious.

It was also nice to find out a little more of why Cloud had come to the Coliseum... but him turning away Zack was so painful! Especially since Zack's already been through that with Seph. He must just feel so miserable. Poor Zack.
luneress chapter 1 . 10/4/2007
ooh! i got chills! this was really really good. so brilliant. it was really really good. i hope theres more. your writing is really good.
Jediempress chapter 1 . 10/4/2007
NIce introduction piece. I love the universe you've set up.