|Reviews for An Unlikely Replacement|
| silverbuggy chapter 2 . 5/2/2008
Hmm...I didn't find many grammatical errors (which is good and quite rare now) but the character are too out of character, if you know what I mean. For one thing, I don't think Miss Satomi would be so...agressive. She's the type of person to speak softly and sternly, not incredibly angry. Well, it's just criticism here! How come you haven't updated in a while?