|Reviews for The Eternal Sleeper|
| writerzero chapter 1 . 3/22/2014
| Riffer Kyle chapter 1 . 8/10/2008
So the curse breaker formula is "Kiss, lather, and repeat as needed."
Lol cute. 8)
| parazesis chapter 1 . 11/22/2007
Aw Cute and fluffy, I'm Jelous of those two, so cute, so sweet, so loving. Her prince has come. :)
| Moondragonheart chapter 1 . 11/14/2007
Cute! I loved it, good job! -
| Toran of Raysed chapter 1 . 10/28/2007
I think that the over all concept of your story was well laid out and written, but your dialouge and sentence structure seemed a little to formal and stiff. Try using contractions like Isn't, instead of is not when writing. It may just be me, but that would have made the sentences flow into each other easier. Hope you take the advice to heart.
| Ikasury chapter 1 . 10/17/2007
*snickers* wonder if their going to move onto the 'real' version of the 'sleeping beauty' story now? *pervy wolfy grin* hehehehehe
anyway, so cute X3
till next *salute-waves* Sayounara!
| seora barbus chapter 1 . 10/16/2007
i really like
because it had
that they were
like those that
happen to me
well i would tell other
people to read this story
| Agent of the Divine One chapter 1 . 10/6/2007
That was perfect. :)
| i.am.emerson.tuesday chapter 1 . 10/5/2007
that was so cute! i love it when the guys cry in a very not-too-overly-emotional way. i heart that.
but...(here it comes) why were bb and rae speaking so formally? i mena, raes okay-ish, but bb "got raven salve becuase she was scalded"?. so in that respect, bb was a little ooc.
but very cute! i enjoyed it! and i think im your first review!
-the infamous emerson