Reviews for The Eternal Sleeper
writerzero chapter 1 . 3/22/2014
Cute.
Riffer Kyle chapter 1 . 8/10/2008
So the curse breaker formula is "Kiss, lather, and repeat as needed."

Lol cute. 8)
parazesis chapter 1 . 11/22/2007
Aw Cute and fluffy, I'm Jelous of those two, so cute, so sweet, so loving. Her prince has come. :)
Moondragonheart chapter 1 . 11/14/2007
Cute! I loved it, good job! -
Toran of Raysed chapter 1 . 10/28/2007
I think that the over all concept of your story was well laid out and written, but your dialouge and sentence structure seemed a little to formal and stiff. Try using contractions like Isn't, instead of is not when writing. It may just be me, but that would have made the sentences flow into each other easier. Hope you take the advice to heart.

Sicnerely,

ToR
Ikasury chapter 1 . 10/17/2007
*snickers* wonder if their going to move onto the 'real' version of the 'sleeping beauty' story now? *pervy wolfy grin* hehehehehe

anyway, so cute X3

till next *salute-waves* Sayounara!

-Ikasury
seora barbus chapter 1 . 10/16/2007
m

i really like

this story

because it had

some moments

that they were

like those that

happen to me

xD

jaja

well i would tell other

people to read this story
Agent of the Divine One chapter 1 . 10/6/2007
That was perfect. :)

Awesome! :D
i.am.emerson.tuesday chapter 1 . 10/5/2007
that was so cute! i love it when the guys cry in a very not-too-overly-emotional way. i heart that.

but...(here it comes) why were bb and rae speaking so formally? i mena, raes okay-ish, but bb "got raven salve becuase she was scalded"?. so in that respect, bb was a little ooc.

but very cute! i enjoyed it! and i think im your first review!

-the infamous emerson