Reviews for The Line
UniqueJackie chapter 1 . 10/31/2008
oh this was amazing I loved the bit with Molly at the end. I wish this was more than a oneshot

I was also listening to Kelly Clarkson's "Addicted" and I thought it fit Mylar pefectly well from Mohinder's POV but maybe it's just me
optimistic girl94 chapter 1 . 5/18/2008
Molly is so cute. I can totally see her doing this.
sakuuya chapter 1 . 10/9/2007
I hope Sylar's lack of powers in last night's eppie means he really has the Shanti virus, so then something very like this fic will happen. Seriously, I loved it. Molly was a little too comfortable around Sylar, but the way you portrayed the killer himself was just fantastic, so confident despite his weakened state. Love. Love love love. See, I can't even write full sentences any more. It was that good.
Unworthy chapter 1 . 10/8/2007
This was very well written and not out of charater at all, I must say. My problem has always been keeping my characters in , well, character, and it's refreshing to see an author who not only has a great word choice, but also keeps true to the integrity of the show.


Amanda Saitou chapter 1 . 10/8/2007
This is the first Heores fanfic I read, and I'm glad I've started by this one. Though one could think this is such an insanity to pair Sylar with anyone, I think Mohinder is indeed his perfect match, anyway! Good story, hope to read more Heroes fics from you!
Eagleh chapter 1 . 10/8/2007
Yay, Mylar D

I've been looking for one of these for a while Thought I was going to have to resort to Paire fanfic.

It's great, just I would have thought Molly would have been much more scared of Sylar.