Reviews for Comatose
Rikku's Confessional chapter 1 . 5/6/2008
I liked this.

No, that's too light...

I LOVED this.

Absolutely adorable and so ingenious!

You're amazing.


Sorry, I just really like fluffy stuff like this.

My stories are always fluffy.

Like cotton balls.


Keep writing.

especially awesome fluffies.

Simple Echo chapter 1 . 12/2/2007
duude. that was amazing.
Phoenix80hp chapter 1 . 10/18/2007
Fluff overload? That was great! Best SxK I've read in such a long time!
haru-teri22 chapter 1 . 10/11/2007
ohh i loved this!

all the flashbacks and stuff were great!


the last part was totally fluff explosion...

[at the time]

i really thought she was gonna die xD
Alantie Mistaniu chapter 1 . 10/10/2007
FLUFF! :D I loved this- a very beautiful touching piece. I was so afraid that you'd actually have Kairi dead, but you didn't, and I squealed for joy. Loved it to pieces.
hinoiri chapter 1 . 10/7/2007

Such a heartwrenching Kaiora!

The flow of the story got me hooked the whole time.



HAIL TO THE REDSKINS -D chapter 1 . 10/7/2007
Yeah, it was def. fluff overload, but I liked the angst...

And I usually hate angst. :-D Great job.
rippling0water0eyes chapter 1 . 10/6/2007

how cute!

yet another masterpiece from the brilliant brilliant you.


you amaze me constantly.
cottongirl619 chapter 1 . 10/6/2007

I loved it. The plot line was absolutely amazing, and I loved the scenes where Sora held her tightly, crying. I love this one shot, It's amazing. You're an amazing writer.
Inspire-Illuminate chapter 1 . 10/6/2007

That was so wonderful I can't even describe it.

I loved that so muchly.

I feel very honored that you wrote this for me.

Scared me for a minute, I thought Kairi was really going to die. The song really fits as well, and I liked how you used all the references to the "puzzle."

I totally owe you one.

Great Job!

SorasKey chapter 1 . 10/6/2007
no story could have a fluff overload. i love fluff! especially sora and kairi fluff. that was really good!

Jaded-Raindrop chapter 1 . 10/6/2007
-brain implosion-

Yeah. This was AWESOME.

I really thought that Kairi was gonna die and leave poor angst-ridden Sora by himself...BUT THEN OMG-SHE WAKES UP~

I love this. The flow and the suspense-you never fail to amaze, chiyoko. :D

silver moon droplet chapter 1 . 10/6/2007

you know how i feel about this amazing fic.


so yeah the fluff was adore

and then non mention of riku

which would totally ruin teh

moment was golden.


i really loved all the


Katherine-The-Crowned chapter 1 . 10/6/2007
Aww, i'm so glad it ended well! I was worried for a minute. NIce job on this one! Very sweet. And, whats a good word for on the edge of my seat to find out how it all ends? Good job!
soraspromise chapter 1 . 10/5/2007
Aw! But the fluff is good. See, if it were me, I probably would have ended up killing her o_o;. I have some strage obsession with tragedies but pretty much go, "DAMN! WHY DID YOU HAVE TO KILL HER!" when I read anyone elses lol.

Beautifully written, I love the details by a lot. And the flashbacks correlating with the present situation was awesome. & the whole sort of Astral projectionish thing where Kairi could hear & feel everything going on but not being able to control it; priceless. Nice peace of work ]