Reviews for Comatose
Rikku's Confessional chapter 1 . 5/6/2008
I liked this.

No, that's too light...

I LOVED this.

Absolutely adorable and so ingenious!

You're amazing.

G.

Sorry, I just really like fluffy stuff like this.

My stories are always fluffy.

Like cotton balls.

D

Keep writing.

especially awesome fluffies.

Rikku
Simple Echo chapter 1 . 12/2/2007
duude. that was amazing.
Phoenix80hp chapter 1 . 10/18/2007
Fluff overload? That was great! Best SxK I've read in such a long time!
haru-teri22 chapter 1 . 10/11/2007
ohh i loved this!

all the flashbacks and stuff were great!

favs!

the last part was totally fluff explosion...

[at the time]

i really thought she was gonna die xD
Alantie Mistaniu chapter 1 . 10/10/2007
FLUFF! :D I loved this- a very beautiful touching piece. I was so afraid that you'd actually have Kairi dead, but you didn't, and I squealed for joy. Loved it to pieces.
hinoiri chapter 1 . 10/7/2007
Squee

Such a heartwrenching Kaiora!

The flow of the story got me hooked the whole time.

Awesomeish.

Faves!

[hinoiri]
HAIL TO THE REDSKINS -D chapter 1 . 10/7/2007
Yeah, it was def. fluff overload, but I liked the angst...

And I usually hate angst. :-D Great job.
rippling0water0eyes chapter 1 . 10/6/2007
aw

how cute!

yet another masterpiece from the brilliant brilliant you.

LOVED IT!

you amaze me constantly.
cottongirl619 chapter 1 . 10/6/2007
Oh...my...god.

I loved it. The plot line was absolutely amazing, and I loved the scenes where Sora held her tightly, crying. I love this one shot, It's amazing. You're an amazing writer.
Inspire-Illuminate chapter 1 . 10/6/2007
OMFG.

That was so wonderful I can't even describe it.

I loved that so muchly.

I feel very honored that you wrote this for me.

Scared me for a minute, I thought Kairi was really going to die. The song really fits as well, and I liked how you used all the references to the "puzzle."

I totally owe you one.

Great Job!

;]
SorasKey chapter 1 . 10/6/2007
no story could have a fluff overload. i love fluff! especially sora and kairi fluff. that was really good!

SorasKey
Jaded-Raindrop chapter 1 . 10/6/2007
-brain implosion-

Yeah. This was AWESOME.

I really thought that Kairi was gonna die and leave poor angst-ridden Sora by himself...BUT THEN OMG-SHE WAKES UP

I love this. The flow and the suspense-you never fail to amaze, chiyoko. :D

/akemi-chan/
silver moon droplet chapter 1 . 10/6/2007
-grins-

you know how i feel about this amazing fic.

YOU KNOW IT.

so yeah the fluff was adore

and then non mention of riku

which would totally ruin teh

moment was golden.

THAT M0MENT WAS GOLDEN.

i really loved all the

canonness.

]
Katherine-The-Crowned chapter 1 . 10/6/2007
Aww, i'm so glad it ended well! I was worried for a minute. NIce job on this one! Very sweet. And, whats a good word for on the edge of my seat to find out how it all ends? Good job!
soraspromise chapter 1 . 10/5/2007
Aw! But the fluff is good. See, if it were me, I probably would have ended up killing her o_o;. I have some strage obsession with tragedies but pretty much go, "DAMN! WHY DID YOU HAVE TO KILL HER!" when I read anyone elses lol.

Beautifully written, I love the details by a lot. And the flashbacks correlating with the present situation was awesome. & the whole sort of Astral projectionish thing where Kairi could hear & feel everything going on but not being able to control it; priceless. Nice peace of work ]

Emerald31