Reviews for Desert Bus Ride 1: A Romance Story and for Ladies
dorime chapter 1 . 5/16
Cute
MaximalMegaminx chapter 1 . 2/10
Great story, I let myself translate it to polish if you don't mind
Guest chapter 1 . 1/3
very good
RedlerSchnyder chapter 1 . 8/3/2019
Someone named Deadwater Gaming has made a GMod animation and uploaded it on Youtube. XD
good chapter 1 . 7/30/2019
Good.
Anonymous chapter 1 . 4/11/2019
Please, good sir, produce this as a short film
Griffin chapter 1 . 4/11/2019
oh no dis is sad I am now cry
clapback chapter 1 . 8/17/2018
A truly classic piece of writing and should be held with the highest regards.
CaptainVinyl chapter 1 . 8/17/2016
This is the best fanfiction I've ever read, 10/10, would read to friend playing Desert Bus again.
Darth Nightmaricus chapter 1 . 4/5/2015
What the fuck is this train wreck?
anon chapter 1 . 2/8/2015
oh my goodness I have never read a fic that brought me this much joy
anon chapter 1 . 7/7/2014
reading this story again, even after all these years, puts a smile on my face :)
Bobert Rridges chapter 1 . 1/22/2014
i am very like of this story, much trajic very sadded. it is very gud story i read and laugh with much emotion and cry. thanc you peetar for very dedicasion to FPI.

VERY MUCH GOOD OF THE STORYLINE AND GRMARRR IT IS MUCH OF THE BRILLIANCE
analuu chapter 1 . 1/17/2014
poo on my crimpo
ILIKEBLOOD69 chapter 1 . 1/16/2014
Brilliant i am thinking, smiling on my face when reading the bus as i am a bus fan. i also like many fbi hero
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