|Reviews for Desert Bus Ride 1: A Romance Story and for Ladies|
| CaptainVinyl chapter 1 . 8/17
This is the best fanfiction I've ever read, 10/10, would read to friend playing Desert Bus again.
| Darth Nightmaricus chapter 1 . 4/5/2015
What the fuck is this train wreck?
| anon chapter 1 . 2/8/2015
oh my goodness I have never read a fic that brought me this much joy
| anon chapter 1 . 7/7/2014
reading this story again, even after all these years, puts a smile on my face :)
| Bobert Rridges chapter 1 . 1/22/2014
i am very like of this story, much trajic very sadded. it is very gud story i read and laugh with much emotion and cry. thanc you peetar for very dedicasion to FPI.
VERY MUCH GOOD OF THE STORYLINE AND GRMARRR IT IS MUCH OF THE BRILLIANCE
| analuu chapter 1 . 1/17/2014
poo on my crimpo
| ILIKEBLOOD69 chapter 1 . 1/16/2014
Brilliant i am thinking, smiling on my face when reading the bus as i am a bus fan. i also like many fbi hero
| 123robot chapter 1 . 8/20/2013
I have never laughed so hard at any fan fiction on this site, especially something that's not even under the Humour category. Good job Peter.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
I... freakin' LOVE this story. Do a sequel or I'll rip your esophagus out.
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/28/2013
Jesus Christ, Romeon and Juliet sucks ass compared to this masterpiece.
| Lol chapter 1 . 5/11/2013
this the is best book of all year time. i lvoe your writers mr peter!
| Mr. FBI Agent mn chapter 1 . 12/7/2012
GTFO OF THE INTERNET.
GO BACK TO SCHOOL.
AND COME BACK WITH GOOD FUCKING GRAMMAR.
P.S: Pls use spell checkar
| B chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
| Jon Freechmin chapter 1 . 3/29/2012
this story is cool
| katydid4 chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
I think the FBI are honored to have this dedivated to them. "We did not hit so it okay"
I see a Newberry award!