|Reviews for Desert Bus Ride 1: A Romance Story and for Ladies|
| dorime chapter 1 . 5/16
| MaximalMegaminx chapter 1 . 2/10
Great story, I let myself translate it to polish if you don't mind
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/3
| RedlerSchnyder chapter 1 . 8/3/2019
Someone named Deadwater Gaming has made a GMod animation and uploaded it on Youtube. XD
| good chapter 1 . 7/30/2019
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 4/11/2019
Please, good sir, produce this as a short film
| Griffin chapter 1 . 4/11/2019
oh no dis is sad I am now cry
| clapback chapter 1 . 8/17/2018
A truly classic piece of writing and should be held with the highest regards.
| CaptainVinyl chapter 1 . 8/17/2016
This is the best fanfiction I've ever read, 10/10, would read to friend playing Desert Bus again.
| Darth Nightmaricus chapter 1 . 4/5/2015
What the fuck is this train wreck?
| anon chapter 1 . 2/8/2015
oh my goodness I have never read a fic that brought me this much joy
| anon chapter 1 . 7/7/2014
reading this story again, even after all these years, puts a smile on my face :)
| Bobert Rridges chapter 1 . 1/22/2014
i am very like of this story, much trajic very sadded. it is very gud story i read and laugh with much emotion and cry. thanc you peetar for very dedicasion to FPI.
VERY MUCH GOOD OF THE STORYLINE AND GRMARRR IT IS MUCH OF THE BRILLIANCE
| analuu chapter 1 . 1/17/2014
poo on my crimpo
| ILIKEBLOOD69 chapter 1 . 1/16/2014
Brilliant i am thinking, smiling on my face when reading the bus as i am a bus fan. i also like many fbi hero