Reviews for Desert Bus Ride 1: A Romance Story and for Ladies
CaptainVinyl chapter 1 . 8/17
This is the best fanfiction I've ever read, 10/10, would read to friend playing Desert Bus again.
Darth Nightmaricus chapter 1 . 4/5/2015
What the fuck is this train wreck?
anon chapter 1 . 2/8/2015
oh my goodness I have never read a fic that brought me this much joy
anon chapter 1 . 7/7/2014
reading this story again, even after all these years, puts a smile on my face :)
Bobert Rridges chapter 1 . 1/22/2014
i am very like of this story, much trajic very sadded. it is very gud story i read and laugh with much emotion and cry. thanc you peetar for very dedicasion to FPI.

VERY MUCH GOOD OF THE STORYLINE AND GRMARRR IT IS MUCH OF THE BRILLIANCE
analuu chapter 1 . 1/17/2014
poo on my crimpo
ILIKEBLOOD69 chapter 1 . 1/16/2014
Brilliant i am thinking, smiling on my face when reading the bus as i am a bus fan. i also like many fbi hero
123robot chapter 1 . 8/20/2013
I have never laughed so hard at any fan fiction on this site, especially something that's not even under the Humour category. Good job Peter.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
I... freakin' LOVE this story. Do a sequel or I'll rip your esophagus out.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/28/2013
Jesus Christ, Romeon and Juliet sucks ass compared to this masterpiece.
Lol chapter 1 . 5/11/2013
this the is best book of all year time. i lvoe your writers mr peter!
Mr. FBI Agent mn chapter 1 . 12/7/2012
Okay look.
YOU SUCK.
GTFO OF THE INTERNET.
GO BACK TO SCHOOL.
AND COME BACK WITH GOOD FUCKING GRAMMAR.
BITCH.

P.S: Pls use spell checkar
B chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
N
Jon Freechmin chapter 1 . 3/29/2012
this story is cool
katydid4 chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
I think the FBI are honored to have this dedivated to them. "We did not hit so it okay"

I see a Newberry award!
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