|Reviews for It's All in Your Head|
| NotJustAGirlJustMe chapter 13 . 9/21/2016
Kind of bummed that you stopped here but I'll go check out the other one.
| JoanIncarnate chapter 13 . 12/26/2011
i knew you had a different version of this but i wanted to read this one first because i wanted to see the before/after effect.
| JoanIncarnate chapter 12 . 12/26/2011
D: oh my god... is IRUKA a bad guy in here!
ohmygod, ohmygod, ohmygod! if this was like x-men, then naruto would be jean gray, the kyuubi would be the phoenix, sasuke is logan (even though his powers are more reminiscent of rogue's). and iruka would be like charles xavier! *CUE THE FANGIRL SQUEAL*
| JoanIncarnate chapter 7 . 12/26/2011
this hatred for sai makes me somewhat sad. i actually really like him in the manga.
| JoanIncarnate chapter 6 . 12/25/2011
lol, this seems so much like x-men to me.
are you really sure "psychokinesis" is what you call it? because isn't pyschokinesis the same thing of telekinesis?
| GuestPerson chapter 13 . 8/18/2009
| DevilBeckons chapter 13 . 2/7/2009
ok evn tho u put it as discontinued and everythin i read it anyway and its GOOD! i wish u continued it...T_T..so the other one is like this one rite? follows the same plot line sorta? hope so im gonna go read it now...
| xXforgottenXx chapter 13 . 11/10/2008
so: "So forget what you knew, start with a clean slate, and jump on the bandwagon" means that you'll completely rewrite this and the two story will only be similiar in one (main) aspect that it's aout people with "powers" (x-man-like). I understood that correctly, didn't I?
Well, I really love/loved this story so far but it's no use if you would have to force yourself to continue it, so I appreciate it even more that you are willingly to "write this again". I already read the new version and I'm not dissapointed at all. :)
| Blood Zephyr chapter 13 . 6/30/2008
O.O I cant wait!
| Kitai Shinsei chapter 13 . 6/18/2008
What the hell... FFN ate half my review for WSON... _
So what I said after "I luffs Hinata-chan" was:
The plot already has so much more going for it than the previous draft, so much has already happened now than had happened at this point in AIYH. It's edgier, darker, far more fast-paced - and you're only on the first chapter!
That's not to say I haven't absolutely adored AIYH up to now, but this is just so much... BETTER!
And congratulations on over 60 reviews in three days! WOW!
| shinseichieien chapter 13 . 6/18/2008
Aw this sort of makes me really sad! I really liked this story! It was one of the best, although it was a bit confusing...
I shall go read the first chapter of the other one!
| se-tar chapter 13 . 6/18/2008
Oh.. so you're rewriting it. I'm sure the plot will be much better ,considering you set it up beforehand, but 'more SasuNaruSasu'? ... *burst to tears* NO~~ my fears came true ... *regaining composure* OK I have an idea/solution/REQUEST please,
-either continue AIYH too as non-yaoi so I entertain myself with it,
-or as I asked before try to not mix romance with the actual plot in WSN,
-or write a non-yaoi version of it too.
I know youre plate is already so full, but please take this poor soul's request into consideration somehow *ultra huge puppy eyes*
| se-tar chapter 12 . 6/18/2008
Wow~~ what a brilliant plot, all this supernatural abilities XD
And mystery is not finished yet, it was so exciting when Sasuke's true ability got revealed, I was like 'gap, No Way' XD. also when Sai talked about Naruto's real problem. I guess that 'others' matter is as exciting too... OMG you're really great in pulling mystery XD
To be honest I hate yaoi, but I do care about the plot too, and as I said your plot is great. usually I'd ask the authore to write another non-yaoi version too, if it was possible for them, but seeing you have your hands full with this many fics, I just hope the yaoi parts aren't mixed with the actual plot so I can skip them easily ] (I completely ignore them :P )
Naruto's personality is strange, he's way too unstable, I know he's in a confusing situation, but still...
Again the plot is great, I read it all in 2 days, though your vocab is so difficult (English is my 2nd language).
BTW you mentiond 'Embracing Dreams'. well because of your huge admiration I checked it out and I must tell you AIYH is way better than it. ED is not even near AIYH. a somewhat wasted plot with loads of mushy romance :S
keep up the great work _
| Broken Sexed Up Bloody Kitten chapter 13 . 6/18/2008
| ghostly.soul.of.a.writer chapter 13 . 6/18/2008
Aww, I liked this fic so far. But if the other one will be even better then I'm in _
*runs off to read*