|Reviews for Silver Lining|
| anonymous chapter 1 . 10/11/2007
WOW I CANT' BELIEVE UR WRITING ANOTHER ONE! I REALLY HOPE IT'S AS GOOD AS THE FIRST ONE! YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SOON!
| kat chapter 1 . 10/11/2007
can't wait, can't wait, can't wait!
great chapter- do update soon! :D
| SvenskaAmerican chapter 1 . 10/11/2007
LOVE IT! D
I can't beleive you're actually doing a sequel to Perception, SO AWESOME! And this chapter was a great first start not to mention ! Omg, I actually cried when I read how everyone died T~T not at first, but after I read how Sai died and what he did, I was balling! And I can see you're still using those big words ;) ha, I was already confused on the second sentence! And I almost cried when I read this paragraph:
'There was always work for someone with her varied skills, but there were no real wars and no epidemics, and healers were not in great demand at the moment. The nature of work offered seemed to run in cycles, and lately it seemed as though everyone who was looking to hire ninja were looking for assassins. She did not claim to be innocent of such dealings, and she did not deny what she was behind false morality, but she was not one of those who could kill for money no matter the target or how trivial their offense to the employer was. No matter how desolate, no matter how desperate and hungry she got, she would not cross that final line. There would always be another job, somewhere, if she looked hard enough. She would not sink so low. They would be ashamed of her if she did.'
That last sentence almost had me crying! I miss the Akatsuki so much T~T! *sniffle* But anyways, great chappy! More creative writing from you that I LOVE, and looking forward to it in the future! And I'm guessing that was Dei at the end of the chapter, because I really doubt it was someone like Naruto who came back from the dead with big angel wings to come and say 'hi' -.- frankly that would just be kinda creepy... anyways LOVE IT! Keep up the good work You're authorism is still better than ever! *bows down* I am not worthy...
~lonely blue moon~
can't wait to see the next chappy! Update when you get the chance!
| Captain Lila chapter 1 . 10/10/2007
Wow. Can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon. :D
| Nozomi chapter 1 . 10/10/2007
Wasn't expecting that.
Well, at least she won't be 'dumping Kakashi for Deidara' or any crappy stuff like that.
You are great writer and a shitty plot like that would have ruined you.
...In my eyes anyway.
And you didn't do that, so you still rock.
Great chapter, despite the...horrible-ness in it.
Looking forward to whatever you have next.
| Shinidama chapter 1 . 10/10/2007
oh man this chapter was so sad...everyone is dead ;(
but we have DeiSaku here :)
this story will be great
| MicaelPink32 chapter 1 . 10/10/2007
OmG i'm so happy theres a sequal!
Can't wait for an update!
Love your writing its really excelent and you really define peoples true personalities.
Keep it up!
| Kelly chapter 1 . 10/10/2007
Wow, that was quite difficult to read. I need to go hug on a Kakashi plushie. [
Great start though. You're really amazing at getting across not only the deep, but also the subtle changes in a character's personality.
Oh, and I've got to say... love the breaking of the scum's wrist. Go Sakura! XD
I can't wait to find out if that was Deidara finding Sakura at the end of the chapter. I can only imagine how he has changed since their last meeting.
Kudos and fan-love sent your way.
Keep writing! _
| Twilight's Aura chapter 1 . 10/10/2007
I almost started crying like a baby again..Why is life worth living if everyone is GONE? It was hard enough when Itachi..:sniffle: :cries: Oh Deidara, please make me a happy woman once again!
| hugsanimekisses04 chapter 1 . 10/10/2007
wow...i'm surprised...really...i never thought you'll make a sequel to perception...not to mention the pairing...very surprising indeed...
I love it! I love it! I love it!
Poor, poor Sakura-chan...everyone she cares, cherishes and loves...they all died...after their deaths, the way she is now is very, very understandable. If I were in her place, I don't think I can live anymore...I'd rather die than to be alive outside but dead on the inside...Oh SAkura-chan...cold, emotionless, heartless Sakura-chan...
Amazing! I really love it! The way you wrote their deaths, Pein's reaction towards the death of his partner Konan, the events that happened...very detailed, flawless, so dark, angsty, and VERY hard to read. I actually reread some parts in order for me to understand it...and consulted our oh-so large and heavy dictionary for me to know the meaning of MANY unfamiliar words written in this chapter...and it's really, really WORTH it! It actually made me cry...it's so sad...
So, is Mr. Right-for-the-week Deidara-kun? Oh I just hope so! To think that this hypnotizing chapter already hooked me[does this sentence even exist?]...I don't know what of the other chapters...oh! I can't wait for the next chappie!
| ringgetsu chapter 1 . 10/9/2007
its me, your resident cry-baby...ehehe, i cried again. with all death happening around her, im surprised and impressed Sakura can still think clearly. i love that about her. she is so pragmatic when it comes to dealing with it. this is a great start by the way..looking forward to reading the next chapters..
| Ai no Yami chapter 1 . 10/9/2007
Thank you so much for these two stories...Perception/Silver Lining is one of my two favorite "story sets" about Sakura's growth; the other is Loophole/Genshi by leafygirl. Your writing flows effortlessly nearly all of the time and I love the introspection of your characterizations - truly a pleasure to read! I'm wicked excited for the next installment in Sakura's life post-Konoha; although, I admit I cried while I read about the war...among many other times in Perception (don't worry though, I laughed more than I cried;-P).
Basically - beautiful work:)!
| RockerLover chapter 1 . 10/9/2007
its really good but im sad that everyone else died! *sniffle* did Neji and Kiba die. just wondering
| UchihaSakura95 chapter 1 . 10/9/2007
I almost started crying cuz every1 dies and i plus the fact taht i was listening to sad music didnt help either
anyway nice job on this and i totally cant wait for the next chapters to come out!
| Jester08 chapter 1 . 10/9/2007
Great first chapter! I can't wait till Deidara and Sakura meet again, so update soon please! Keep up the excellent work! _