Reviews for Snow and a Gentle Smile
Elemental77 chapter 1 . 10/6/2013
One of the greatest and saddest one-shots I have read XD
haku is a boy chapter 1 . 5/29/2013
HAKU IS A BOY! *name says it all*
Axcel chapter 1 . 5/10/2013
This makes Kakashi feel even shittier for killing her, even though it was an accident.
omally-dood chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
awwwwww im sad now...

stil that was pritty good
Still Not Dead Yet chapter 1 . 6/26/2010
Very bittersweat
Kaijukage Master of the Uzuton chapter 1 . 5/15/2009
This was excellent it's taken me awhile to review cus well i'm lazy and forgetful but i didn't forget about this story just whether i reviewed or not. i personaly belive you should get an award for this i just wish you'd do a longer narufemhaku you have amazing talent UNLIKE ME but your awesome your stories awesome the end

Kaijukage
Iron Monkey Fist chapter 1 . 12/29/2008
This story is in one word...'vague'.

It didn't make sense, at all. How is it true love when they met once? Why did Haku kiss him?

I can totally mean why you'd say your came with this on a whim. It isn't detailed enough.

Good luck with your next story,

Iron Monkey Fist.
shadowzerover5 chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
Nice job and a good NarufemHaku story.
the grey mage chapter 1 . 4/8/2008
why does haku gotta die? haku is one of the most under valued characters of naruto. but i would have loved to see this happen. its just so dramatic.
Dawn of Daybreak chapter 1 . 1/27/2008
AH! Some good things AWLAWYS hit an author in the shower! Its the same here, i too think about plots and such in the shower.

Great fic.
Akira Stridder chapter 1 . 1/24/2008
continue the story and let Haku's death be his motivation to be powerful!
Useful76 chapter 1 . 1/9/2008
Not bad. It was acute little oneshot.
VyseN chapter 1 . 12/20/2007
I loved it.. But now you need to write a NaruHaku story where she survives... just so my heart won't die right before christmas because of you... you don't want that do you?

Although short, I'm very pleased with the quality of this fic overall. The grammar is good, the plot is good, and as a NaruHaku fan... well, I just really like this story!
MasterO'Badgers17 chapter 1 . 12/18/2007
Nice job! I really love this pairing. And you didn't overuse "..." those are good in a story to show pauses in speech, thoughts, and actions. You used them in the right place and it came together really well.
SineDei chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
that was amazing

you carried alot of emotions through it, and made it even better by showing how much of an ass his teammates can be. this has to be my favorite pairing because it is as if they are souls together
33 | Page 1 .. Last Next »