|Reviews for She's Thirteen|
| Nelly-Crystal chapter 1 . 10/23/2008
really cute! i loved it when she said: "I once read a book about a boy named Sean. He was gay..." xD
| Moondragonheart chapter 1 . 11/14/2007
That was so cute! Or some other word that has left my mind for the moment. I think I'll go read your other story right now! -
| Dark Fox Angel 13 chapter 1 . 10/20/2007
| ElphieYo chapter 1 . 10/11/2007
oh loved it soo cute! sorry about you and your friend thats happening to me to tho me and my friend arent diff. just drifting but very good story!
| XX.xXx.AchillezWiplash.xXx.XX chapter 1 . 10/6/2007
WOOHOO! Great story! Very cute! D
| Agent of the Divine One chapter 1 . 10/6/2007
That was awesome!
Especially the last line. I hope to see more of the same from you in the future. :)
| beautifulpurpleflame chapter 1 . 10/6/2007
It was a nice little one shot. But, personally, I don't really think 13 year olds making out and groping each other is appropriate. I know it happens, but that doesn't mean it's alright. I was totally going along with the story and thinking, 'Well, this isn't so bad,' and then you said Gar slid his tongue into Ravens mouth. That was a bit over the edge for me. Like I said, the story was nice and cute, but it just didn't work for me. Can't wait for your next update on 'I'm in Love with a Stripper'.
| WickedWitchoftheSE chapter 1 . 10/6/2007
aw, such cutness! I loved it...now to check out our other story.