Reviews for She's Thirteen
Nelly-Crystal chapter 1 . 10/23/2008
really cute! i loved it when she said: "I once read a book about a boy named Sean. He was gay..." xD
Moondragonheart chapter 1 . 11/14/2007
That was so cute! Or some other word that has left my mind for the moment. I think I'll go read your other story right now! -
Dark Fox Angel 13 chapter 1 . 10/20/2007
That...Was...AWESOME!
ElphieYo chapter 1 . 10/11/2007
oh loved it soo cute! sorry about you and your friend thats happening to me to tho me and my friend arent diff. just drifting but very good story!
XX.xXx.AchillezWiplash.xXx.XX chapter 1 . 10/6/2007
WOOHOO! Great story! Very cute! D
Agent of the Divine One chapter 1 . 10/6/2007
That was awesome!

Especially the last line. I hope to see more of the same from you in the future. :)
beautifulpurpleflame chapter 1 . 10/6/2007
It was a nice little one shot. But, personally, I don't really think 13 year olds making out and groping each other is appropriate. I know it happens, but that doesn't mean it's alright. I was totally going along with the story and thinking, 'Well, this isn't so bad,' and then you said Gar slid his tongue into Ravens mouth. That was a bit over the edge for me. Like I said, the story was nice and cute, but it just didn't work for me. Can't wait for your next update on 'I'm in Love with a Stripper'.

-beautifulpurpleflame
WickedWitchoftheSE chapter 1 . 10/6/2007
aw, such cutness! I loved it...now to check out our other story.