Reviews for On the House
Luneve chapter 1 . 5/30/2011
i love JackxMuffy!
abb chapter 1 . 7/19/2010
I sure enjoyed it!
Loving-Chakra chapter 1 . 7/30/2009
ooh! I loved it! So cute

The game is fun but could do with some more people and places.

More options.

but still good!
chipmunkluvr96 chapter 1 . 9/11/2008

that was so cute!
Quirke chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
I loved this.

I've always like the Muffy x Jack pairing, but none of the fan-fiction that I've read so far has ever really put Muffy in a good light /

But this was a really nice read!
Tristan-the-Dreamer chapter 1 . 2/16/2008
I am freaking out...Muffy and Jack are my grandparents' names...0o...

Sugar.Milk.Tea chapter 1 . 10/9/2007
So funny and I really love one on one moments!

Plus I have way more mistakes in my fan-fic.

5 stars!
Karen Moondrop chapter 1 . 10/8/2007
You know what? I'm one of the least girly girls I know. However, you really drew me into this! Kudos to you, my fellow (though far more respected) writer!
The Scarlet Sky chapter 1 . 10/7/2007
Muffy...I love that girl.

Excellent! I love it! But you know that, because I beta-read it! Haha.

So...keep up the good work and happy writing.
klutz586 chapter 1 . 10/7/2007
oh I love it! its awesome! ur good, you should make this into a real fanfic or well this is a fanfic but I mean a not an oneshot! I would review everytime!
Momo-chan12 chapter 1 . 10/7/2007
aw,a MuffyxJack fic!there is so not enough fics of them and I really liked it!It was so sweet and adoreable and Im glad Muffy finally found someone who really cares for her.I loved it!Plz write more fics like this,they rock!I look forward to reading more from you
This is getting old chapter 1 . 10/6/2007
Yay, a muffy/jack fic thats not a bashing one!...

aww, kinda cute...there is something a little off with the fic, but i cant quite put my finger on it...darn...
Ekoaleko chapter 1 . 10/6/2007
Wow. You capture Muffy's perspective amazingly. She and Jack... hah, they're such flirts. I'd say this is on top of adorable. The only thing I'd like to point out is, erm you missed Flora :p

-sticks into C2- I think it belongs there ;)