Reviews for Saving Myself |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Bonjour, Je suis en train de lire toutes tes fics les unes après les autres et j'aime beaucoup. Surtout quand SEV est le père ou le mentor d'Harry. Peux tu me dire quel est le titre de la suite ? si tu l'as écrite. Merci d'avance |
![]() ![]() This story is a very good one you should write more of it |
![]() ![]() This is a very good story you should write more of it |
![]() ![]() ![]() I would love to read the sequel. Excellent story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is good enough to reread many years later |
![]() ![]() great story. sequel would be great. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I decided to play spin the page and pick a story of Debs’. This one came up. I don’t know if anyone caught it, but if you ever go back in to edit it, the heading at the top of the chapter is ‘a few weeks later.’ The setting in the paragraph is a cold day for summer but 2 chapters back it was a few weeks until Christmas when they were meeting McG at the gates. ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your writing's definitely improved in your recent stories from how it was during this story. I'm just reading some of your old stuff and the jumping between timelines was confusing for me, but I liked the concept of this one. Their quick changes in emotion weren't realistic though. Like James went from adamantly believing Harold was the BWL to admitting defeat a mere 20 words later? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wat a awesome twist this had loved it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved the story. Really looking forward forward to the sequel! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not the most professionally written story, but it has a great deal of originality, and it is entertaining. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please make a sequel. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really want to slap Lily. It's amazing how she could do this after being rejected by someone from her family before...I just...wow. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Timeline is a bit (a lot) messy but a nice quick readthank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like your story's. I would like Sequels toALL of your Story's. |