|Reviews for The Final Steps|
| zychotik chapter 9 . 3/4
I don't review often... I only just started the fiction and its just one fight after the next which is very hard to enjoy. Its needs more fluff and time between major plot point fights. As well written as it is I am finding it very difficult to enjoy... sorry
| iCards chapter 42 . 2/1
Even if we are down to once or twice a year up dates this still one of the best fics, best Naruto fic IMO, that I have read; and I look forward to reading it when I recieve an update.
Yuji is the ninja Spider-man with his own Shinobi-Oc. He even crawls through vents like the video games! I think there was a Hulk reference for Sakura, and even in fanfiction she still can't cook.
Basically everyone is here, the bad guy has had the big bad monolouge for his plan(I like how he knows how unoriginal his plan is.), and his scheme is starting to fall apart with his building so like you said all that is left now is the carnage.
With two or three missions colliding at once like this I wonder how much paperwork this will be for Tsunade.
| The Tailed Titan 72 chapter 42 . 1/30
"Hot chocolate actually" that line cracked me up given the situation. As always it's very, very good.
| 25BAM50 chapter 42 . 1/29
great chapter like always
| Ducks-Go-Aflack chapter 42 . 1/29
I really want there to be fan art for this fic. So Good!
| Joi Fullbuster chapter 2 . 1/24
| Tifah98 chapter 2 . 1/22
Hey its like that with me n my friends
| Avatar Conner chapter 2 . 12/8/2013
Yuji reminds me pod Peter Parker, with the wires as a substitute for webs.
| Kurama Thunderstorm chapter 1 . 11/8/2013
awesome story dude..please complete it..
| leafstone chapter 41 . 8/31/2013
| Guest chapter 41 . 8/5/2013
Great chapter! Looking forwards to reading more :)
| 25BAM50 chapter 41 . 8/3/2013
Great to see that your back
| iCards chapter 41 . 7/30/2013
Always happy for a new chapter.
The Auction sting was very exciting. Ino's form of torture was also entertaining and a scumbag's worst nightmare.
The meet between Iori and Sauske was bound to happen. I wonder how she will react when she finally gets caught up on everything, now that she has heard "the man's" life story?
Naruto's team seems to be lucky and not so lucky since they are getting info, but the targets are letting them have it. Also, I wonder what Naruto can do with that sword?
| The Keeper of Worlds chapter 41 . 7/29/2013
This is gonna get good!
| Guest chapter 40 . 7/4/2013
I just spent the last couple of days reading your story from the beginning and I've really enjoyed it. Hope to see an update soon