|Reviews for The Final Steps|
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/17
I hope you're raped repeatedly and killed.
| samuraipanda85 chapter 19 . 4/16
| Koko7180 chapter 49 . 4/16
I read this slowly. I have to admit I am incredibly glad of seeing the development of your writing. Back in the first episodes the names and such are mistaken, something easily corrected, and even though there were some things that didn't sound well it kept me interested.
I have to congratulate you on the evolution of the stories and characters. You have managed to obtain a great fix that includes original storylines and good OCs.
Can't wait to read more!
| samuraipanda85 chapter 18 . 4/10
You killed Tonton.
I'm not sure how I feel about that.
The rest of the chapter was excellent.
But you killed Tonton.
| samuraipanda85 chapter 17 . 4/7
Very nice, although I question why Yaji had to bite the boy's dick.
| samuraipanda85 chapter 16 . 4/6
Yaji is now my favirtue character.
| samuraipanda85 chapter 15 . 4/6
That absolute dick! What's-his-face, Iori crushed on him, and he tricked her like that!
| samuraipanda85 chapter 14 . 4/5
That was a Hell of a chapter, and a great introduction of the boy's father.
| samuraipanda85 chapter 13 . 4/5
Dang, now ain't that something? All that exposition.
| samuraipanda85 chapter 12 . 4/2
Naruto makes a great Jounin-sensei.
| samuraipanda85 chapter 10 . 3/23
Reading your story is like being on a roller-coaster that just won't stop.
| samuraipanda85 chapter 9 . 3/23
Wow, step on the gas and never let up. This is definitely one of those GREATS.
| samuraipanda85 chapter 8 . 3/23
Jesus Christ that got dark. I have no idea how Naruto survived either. Just damn.
| samuraipanda85 chapter 7 . 3/23
Beast mode, I love it. Non-stop action
| samuraipanda85 chapter 6 . 3/23
Love it, love it.