|Reviews for The Final Steps|
| Uncle Joe chapter 6 . 10/15/2007
Kill the UCHIHA kill him
| rickp2006 chapter 6 . 10/14/2007
Hey, great chapter, interesting scenes. Cant wait for next chapter.
Hope you update soon :D
| leneypoo chapter 5 . 10/13/2007
Interesting story, but use spell check!
It's "Raikage" not Reikage. Sorry, but that was just bugging me a lot. Also there was something about Yuki's wire wrapping around Naruto's "waste" that was just odd...although a spellchecker wouldn't catch that, a simple read through would.
Anyways hope to see what happens next.
| WarmasterCain55 chapter 5 . 10/13/2007
Good story. As for NaruSaku, can't tell you exactly but we still LOVE it.
| rickp2006 chapter 5 . 10/13/2007
Hey, very nice story, i think you are doing very well here, and god damn that thing about Manas stomach being stabbed made me wanna vomit. Also it should be interesting too see if Naruto ends up saving this person like everyone else he has met, except Sasuke. I cant decide which way you plan on going, however i know it will be good. Cant wait for more NaruSaku interaction too lol. btw, about what you said in point 4 of your rant on NaruSaku haters, ive read on sites and stuff that SasuSaku is the most popular pairing in Japan, although that still doesnt mean much in my opinion. Also, i agree with what you said about the pairings, however one thing you gotta understand is, they dont think NaruSaku is the only pairing thats hinted at, they think SasuSaku and NaruHina is hinted at alot more. Its just the way people percieve things, what they view as a SS/NH moment to us wouldnt be a moment at all. Also, the reason most people hate NaruSaku is because of Sakuras part 1 treatment of Naruto, which i personally dont think is that bad, an essay written by an admin at the Heaven and Earth Boards described why it isnt that bad. Its annoying when people think that Sakura was an evil witch to Naruto when its clear in the manga she wasnt, hell she even cheered for him at the chunin exams. Anyway, time for me to stop this rant lol. Cant wait for next chapter.
Hope you update soon :D
| maxslayer10 chapter 5 . 10/11/2007
great chapter, Great Story. I can't wait to see Sakura and Naruto relationship start soon I hope. Plus I think that Sakura and Naruto will end up at the end because they have hinted at it at in the chapters in the manga. Like the detail of the chacters storyline deal very good.
| full-metal-sousuke chapter 5 . 10/10/2007
well that was a good chapter. keep up the good work and update soo. dont worry about getting it wrong...some alot of them havnt been shown in the manga or anime...
as for the seven tails
Shichibi (Seven Tails), Kaku
its a badger
go here and it has all of them
| IronicEnding chapter 5 . 10/10/2007
Very nicely done on the background story for Kenji. Originally i had my doubts as to how original his character was, but now they have all been cleared up. Very good story indeed.
I must say i wasn't imaginging such a strong narusaku defense at the end. Can't imagine who have been bothering you so much about the pairing. Although i suppose from now on ill just refer them to this chapter to give my arguments. Nicely played.
| spurious-verisimilitude chapter 3 . 10/10/2007
In chapter 3... AN you asked if anyone knew a Japanese/English translator with Japanese in English.
The following site should help you.
there is one more out there... but I forgot the link... but that could be because I found this site to be better.
| cristwelrine chapter 5 . 10/10/2007
Now this is a story plot you dont see very often. Nicely done. No comment. Kepp up the good work.
| razgriz05 chapter 5 . 10/10/2007
Great story so far! Hopefully, there will be more narusaku in future chapters
| TheBlueDragonWolf chapter 5 . 10/10/2007
This is a great story but i hope we can read more narutoXSakura i am a big fan of this pairing!
| Tohno Shiki chapter 5 . 10/10/2007
Get ready for a long NaruSaku rant.
Yes, I agree wholeheartedly with you. NaruSaku is just meant to be, they hint so obviously at it in the manga. Sakura's relationship with Naruto is so perfect for one reason: it developed so well from the start of the series. She went from feeling hate to developing feelings for him, and he practically lives for her sake (not exaggerating). SasuSaku and NaruHina fans should face the facts, those pairings are a thing of the past. In Part II of the manga, there is not a single hint for either of those pairings.
Anyway, great chapter, Naruto was saved by a genin o_O. The Raikage seems to be a mix of Gaara and Naruto, but if Gaara could be saved, so can he! Hope to see an update soon!
| zornoid13 chapter 4 . 10/9/2007
This is a very interesting story. I really like how it is going.
Hope u update it soon
| davidorr chapter 4 . 10/8/2007