Reviews for The Final Steps
Guest chapter 39 . 7/21/2012
Another fine chapter to kick things off.

Hero and Setsuna my 'Gundam senses' are tingling.

Also, is Iori doing what she is thinking of doing just out of spite of her old village?
Lawrenceakapaco chapter 38 . 5/5/2012
The lemon made me... happy, lol but very very very very very GOOD STORY BRO
happy everyday life chapter 38 . 3/6/2012
Wow I love it! I thought you abandoned this fic. Glad you didn't! I love the way you made Sakura awesome with her combat abilities AND medic abilities.

Sakura and Naruto supporting each other as a partner is just the type of relationship I want them to have.

Also, was the guy talking to the Kyuubi at the end Dark Naruto? I love Dark Naruto. I am a fan of Inner Sakura/Dark Naruto pairing actually. I wonder which can be more sly?
TeamChaotix chapter 16 . 2/23/2012
So I went and decided to go back to read this story because I totally forgot what it was about. I'm just starting chapter 16 now, and much to my surprise you mentioned my old FF name. :o I'm NaruSakuHasYou. Who says I abandoned this story! Never! I'm just, like you mentioned, lazy and doesn't review much. xD

But anyways, I'm finally starting figure out why I loved this story so much back then! I'll give you my full feedback when I'm finally done! :D
the Great Unknown chapter 38 . 2/17/2012
This is my first reveiw so there I go, I have enjoyed reading this Fanfic for the last couple yrs. THE FINAL STEPS is a well written and creative story that stays true to the spirt of the NARUTO have achieve a balance between romance, humor, intrigue and the martial art action elements. My only two compliants are how long from the last update. I assumed you had abanoned your story like Too many fanfic writers before have. The other is some weak name choices for the OC characters. I suggest browsing thru Wikipedia's listtings other anime/manga series for character names. Don't be so hard on yourself about the love scenes. Both were written with tenderness and tact unlike too many Larry Flint wanabes on this site. This a Fanfiction site not a porn site people. Sorry about that last, rant it wasn't direct at you but other writers. Please keep writing so I can continue to read this astounding Naruto/Sakura fanfic. Peace out
iCards chapter 38 . 2/12/2012
Not much going on just stuff to clear issues up like you said.

Naruto and Sakura are REALLY enjoying this new level in their relationship.

I find it interesting that Sai was paired with Shiguri in the picture since they were both raised by Danzo and shed him from their lives. I think you had Naruto mention that.

Also, I'm going to through my guess as to our two mystery people at the end. The one with the Akatsuki is Kabuto, and the one talking to "Kyuubi" is Naruto's bad side.

Even after a long wait it was still very fun to read, and I am looking forward to the next chapter even if it takes another long wait.
Jon chapter 38 . 2/12/2012
nice. been waitin a long time for this one.
GodRealm chapter 38 . 2/12/2012
Yay, you updated! Aw man for the longest time I was worried that this story was going on the hiatus shelf for the rest of time but when I saw that email in my phone this morning my excitement got me right up and ready to read. And it wasn't just an update, it was a nice long chapter that I've been dyingggg to read. I'm super happy that you didn't forget about your readers on FF and you came back. I only have 3 or so stories that i'm avidly pursuing so this was a great surprise! Please don't keep me hanging like that again, I don't think I or the others could take that again haha. Anyway, great chapter, great story, I'm eager to see the next arc and what it has to bring us. Don't ever give this story up PLEASE! You're story is nothing short of amazing as well as your writing style. Thanks a lot and be safe!

- GodRealm
happy everyday life chapter 18 . 9/21/2011
It's itadakimasu, notikematsu. Also, it's Teuchi, not Tenchu.

I think you mixed up Genma and Raidou together. Genma was the referee and Raidou was the one who guarded Raikage at the chuunin exams!

well, it isn't a big mistake so be careful next time:)
happy everyday life chapter 17 . 9/21/2011
I am very excited on what Sasuke is planning to do! Please make him appear soon XD
happy everyday life chapter 16 . 9/21/2011
Hehehe I will never get tired of the Narusaku make-out!
happy everyday life chapter 15 . 9/21/2011
In the earlier chapters I thought you made them team 7 not team 12. Which is it? And what happened to the new team eight and new team 10 that appeared on your earlier chapters?
happy everyday life chapter 14 . 9/21/2011
Wow, I loved the Narusaku in the end.

So in the end, did Sakura send those letters to Ryu's wife?
happy everyday life chapter 13 . 9/21/2011
I totally loved the Narusaku date!

And Sakura killing Yuji's father was another interesting twist to your story. Naruto will have a hard time getting in between the two.
happy everyday life chapter 12 . 9/21/2011
It's mangekyo, not magenkyo.

And Sasuke making Oro his slave was an interesting twist! I love it!

You might have said it in the chapter notes from before, but after reading this chapter I think you should go on with this story until Naruto has children. The reason is because, it would be interesting to see what a jinchuuriki's child(in this case Naruto's) would have to go through, and what Naruto will have to do about it as Hokage. I can also see conflict arise between himself and his child. There are many potential with that kind of plot. Anyways just my opinion, take it as you will:)
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