Reviews for Beginings and Endings
Guby-san chapter 1 . 7/24/2013
It was a lovely story I really enjoyed it :)
h e l l b r o k e chapter 1 . 8/8/2011
Hmm you should update! This is brilliant work :)
AliciaLeon chapter 1 . 1/30/2010
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THIS IS THE BEST ITAINO STORY I'VE EVER SEEN!
Fantasy.Kairy chapter 1 . 1/7/2010
I really like this pairing, and the way that you put them in this story is so cute *-* if you plan to continue it i'll love read it!
shyclueless chapter 1 . 10/1/2008
This was as good as the first one. I'm not really an Itachi/Ino fan but it's very good. Keep writing, you have talent!
uchiha-ino03 chapter 1 . 8/6/2008
please don't mind the flamer WTF...she's a friend of mine and she's just really irritated at the thought of sasuino and especially itaino...continue to write more cause you're really good and cuz i'm a fan of sasuino and itaino:)
ichigogakure.notte chapter 1 . 8/5/2008
moghedian-san, please dont mind the FLAMER earlier. i know her personally and shes just a solid fan of itasaku. she and DONNA YAN is currently in a war of Itasaku and Itaino. FORGIVE THEM. by the way, so far, i like the story. ahehe. and FLAMER-kun, its "Omae wa yowai." tsk tsk. dont pour your HATRED on our fellow FF writer. PUHLEEZ. and FF is has a subtitle which says "UNLEASH YOUR IMAGINATION." duh, FLAMER-kun. xD anyway, moghedian-san, KEEP WRITING! AND DO NOT MIND FLAMER-KUN. SHES JUST 13, LIKE ME. xD
WTF chapter 1 . 8/2/2008
-continuation

SHE'LL BURN HIS EYES TO NO END!

Open your own eyes, dude. There can be no such thing that can be formed that can make this darned pairing realistic. This isn't realistic at all. Your story isn't realistic. There are so many holes in your story, and that's why you got so few reviews. Despite your efforts, it was just wasted on the end! Hello? You know why? ItaIno sucks. ItaIno sucks. ItaIno sucks. Period. I don't really understand you, I think I can never! Ino would just be a plain slut towards Itachi. She'll continue to brag him because he was as hot and sexy as my Sasuke-kun. Well, Whatever. Another question. Haven't you read the manga? Haven't you seen how Itachi suffered so much? Please have pity. Please don't put more suffering on his shoulders. I mean, how come? How come can Ino make him happy? Look on the dark side, there's no such thing that that bitchy slut can do. Itachi is cold and very very distant. He likes to make his own decisions on his own and prevail what he thinks is right. He'll never show emotions especially 'love' in a concrete way-just abstract. He loves Sasuke so much, and he never said it-just implied it. "I Love you" isn't on his vocabulary. I apologize though, but all of the characters in your story are OOC. Itachi never did or can risk his life on an end that will not be his little brother or the village or a whatnot that isn't significant for him at all. He didn't care for his partner; why would he care for a woman he hadn't even live d with? So many plot holes, so many obvious spelling mistakes. You're out of the Japanese, dude. It's okaa-san, and have you known Itachi and Sasuke's mother? That pretty 35 year old woman known as UCHIHA MIKOTO! Whatever. Unrealistic. You can't even spell beginning correctly. The title says it all-many said that. Your title is a mistake, and I'd say, therefore, your story is as well. How come can Ino talk with a raven? Is she a raven as well? Maybe. Dark, ugly, and evil. I don't understand, this is beyond what fanfiction really is. Itachi is an Uchiha, slaughtered his clan-for his little brother and village-had a lover, whom he killed as well. There are things which we see beyond the eye and there are things that shouldn't be based on the plain contemporary appearance-Itachi was like that. His life was something biased; all I can say is, there was no point on your story. It so senseless. Sorry if I'm repeating the idea of this fact to you again; however, I wasted time on doing this. Fine once again. Itachi is only open to what he thinks is right, there would be no exceptions for that, he is a genius after all-he knew the consequences of the regards of his actions. So, I think, he can't care for someone who isn't, at all, a part of his plan, and he wouldn't care in the end. Meanwhile, the blonde had a normal shinobi life, no stresses of pain, nothing at all. She even doubted that she could probably save her own friend's life in the forest of the death back then. Sakura is way better than her. Sakura including another someone, can kill an Akatsuki. She killed Sasori, after all. She was a part of it. How about the ugly blonde? All she had done on that fight with Kakuzu and Hidan was watch as if it was a movie show. Hello? If she had only been determined and stronger, she would be able to save Asuma. She cried again. That's just plain pathetic. She should stay a flower seller than a shinobi. Darn, she even tried her 'charms' in Neji. Which ended up funny though-he just shrugged it off. Sai even said that she was gorgeous, and she was like, OMG, Sai-kun likes me. When on the forest of death, she treats Shikamaru and Choji as if she was a great leader, while, it was so obvious that she was the weakest. Shikamaru can make her swing her own kunai on her herself while he can easily dodge her pathetic technique. Chouji, yes, I wish he just crushes her lame bones already. -sigh- I'm tired ranting. So goodbye. I wish you luck on opening your eyes. -Omoi wa yowai- Itachi says that for you.

You want to know me? I'm an author with whooping reviews. A mean author, a very mean one.

And yes, count it, very much younger than you, onee-san.
averybigwhatver chapter 1 . 8/2/2008
You wanted a review? I'll give you one.

First of all, prepare for a tissue for all I have to say. I don't care about your feeling or you unnecessary smuts that you shouldn't had at all, because it's a very big falsified impact on your story. ItaIno sucks, it sucks way more than Itasaku. I mean, come on, hello! They didn't even meet once in a dear life time, and I'd say Itachi's eyes will deteriorate more because he doesn't like the sun! You don't get it? I'll explain EVERYTHING for you. Ino is a hyper useless kind of slutty woman who likes everything she sees. Sasuke, Shikamaru, Sai...blah, blah, blah, oh come on! Itachi will kill her on first sight, and
donna yan chapter 1 . 8/2/2008
I LOVED IT, amazing, simply amazing...from everything that I've read this is by far the BEST!

i loved it because it was so detailed...i normally don't like love stories but this one is an exception. also, i realyy like ino better than sakura...so i love stories about ino with sasuke or itachi

i beg you...write more about ino and itachi or ino and sasuke...obviously i'm a fan of itaino and sasuino

write more about ino with sasuke or itachi and i will surely give a very positive review :)
BatsyLady chapter 1 . 7/21/2008
i love this pairing so much! this story is amazing and awesome so few of these stories :( but this one is well written too
xXbl00d-KunoichiXx chapter 1 . 7/8/2008
OMG!

this story was so amazing! even though it was long... it was worthwhile.

im so happy to find another itaino fan!

hmm.. i should dedicate a story of itaino for you!

lol. cant wait for more itaino stories from you.

laterz!

-Bl00d-Kunoichi
mdv chapter 1 . 4/15/2008
I didn't really get the story the first time round but after reading it again, i thought it was really sweet. Great job. just one thing: could you add something to indicate different time skips?

It's a little confusing.

XD
Tsiuq chapter 1 . 2/27/2008
I ... liked it.
auntiehippie chapter 1 . 2/3/2008
oh man, i luv this story. like alot. it was really...idk, just..really..sweet.i guess the word would be...idk. anyways, the point is i liked it.
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