Reviews for Doomed
Lara.x chapter 1 . 2/9/2016
Really good! Not sure which one I prefer! Omg you are such a good author! Virtual hugs! Lara
A Decent Writer chapter 1 . 11/1/2014
this is really sweet
Konohashinobi07 chapter 1 . 2/1/2013
aww so sweet! lol. :) it's good. I 3 it.
Archangel of Persia chapter 1 . 6/21/2012
Love, love, loved it!

...I think that completely sums up what I can say about it :)

Faviourite bit :

'I was doomed


I loved it'

Great ending, I had to smile, in fact I think I was smiling through the whole thing, just perfect!
ohprongs chapter 1 . 11/5/2011
and there'll be love love love when people read this

'cause it's a-may-ziiing

this rocks

you rock

everybody rocks

rock on.

rainkisses chapter 1 . 8/31/2011
I love your story. And I especially love this line - She's just there, and she's mine, and I am more than willing to be hers.

Wonderfully worded. Thanks for sharing this work! :)
NobodyCanKnow chapter 1 . 7/7/2011
this is so good. i love your writing!
Amanda chapter 1 . 4/30/2011
i loved your story! the way you describe james made him sound like a real guy! i just loved it! thanks for writing .
liebedance chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
This was brill. I love your writing of James. He sounds like a guy! Really, brill.
papercranes chapter 1 . 1/18/2011
That was beautiful. I love it.
callmekiwi chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
gosh that was amazing :D i love love love your writing style. i really do. and i havent come across many not-too-repetitive companion fics but this was great (: you should definitely write some more lily/james..
sighnomore chapter 1 . 12/5/2010
i LOVED this and seventeen. your writing style is absolutely fantastic. you capture the mood and the couple perfectly. i think you should definitely write some more lily and james fics. love the way you portray them.
crazyelf22 chapter 1 . 4/26/2010
:D Love it even beter! You've really got a way with words. The style you write with is just really simple and so natural. I really enjoy it and think you've done a fantastic job! chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
Oh, James! He's just the very cutest, sexiest, best thing in the whole world1
xMrsJamesPotterx chapter 1 . 1/3/2010

That made me cry...just a little bit...

Simply, utterly wonderful.
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