you are very talented

I loved this story. Way differnt from what I usually read but so compelling.

Wow... Over one hundred thousand words building up to this chapter, and it was absolutely perfect.

I applaud you, this story, and I give you a heartfelt encore, as I know I will be returning to this story once more.

Thank you for taking the time to write this work of art.

Bravo!

God. Both this story and it's short companion are so heartfelt and beautiful. The characters evolved in such a realistic way that at times I had tears in my eyes and at others I felt like punshing some of these wizards for their stupidity. I was especially touched by the scene where Severus couldn't stand by any longer and watch the Harry pretend to be in any state to comfort anyone else.

Thank you for sharing this incredible work with us.
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Words can't express how much I'm loving this story.

Awsome!

A Severus Snape point of view! What a lucky star. This is quite the intriguing story. The beginning frankly was a challenging piece of work and then, the middle throws this abundance of information and suddenly, Severus is falling. It's appalling and gosh did you work well to cow readers. Harry is all battered and Severus is indecisive of it all until the whole thing smacks hjm in the face. There are times where the story lacks consistency but it does not throw the readers overly. There is a similar plot point where a Bill/Charlie has been mentioned in a story, though it's somewhere and probably named another title.

I love hate you right now. This was beautiful! I have been on an emotional rollercoaster while reading it (which is always a good sign to me). I wish you had one or two more chapters because the end feels very short. But 10 out of 10 for sure.

This is deep and interesting story. I enjoyed reading it, guessing what will happen next. Thank you for writing it ;)

I just loved this story! I've had a few back-to-back 2am nights plowing through, utterly consuming this story. I loved the way you developed the characters (and also made us wait for the smut).

It was just beautiful! Well done and wishing it wasn't over. However, it's 2am again and I need to get to bed. Thank you again for a wonderful story!

I'm apparently a bit late to the party, but I just wanted to pop in and say I'm loving your story. I love the depth to the characters and your word choices. I'm a sucker for a good vocabulary, so I'm head-over-heels in that aspect too.
I'm super happy that the story is finished so I can plow on at my own (ridiculous...who needs sleep, really?) speed.

Just starting this chapter and eager for Snape to let his guard down. We all know he wants to... :D haha

Thanks for the wonderful story, so far!

nice

This as to be one of the best Harry fanfics I had read.

Damn, that was excellent.

One of the few dark Harry fic's I love!